- Erotic Poetry
- Zealot
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Carnal sustenance to feed this
carniverous appetite.
Lick salt from skin,
feast with profane hunger
for flesh.
Zealot on my knees before the messiah,
hear my prayers
in-between moans.
Whose blood must I drink
to wash this communion down?
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoand i love that first line........carnal is one of my favorite words. nice work sabina.........sorry it took so long for me to get to this......don
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoyou gel eroticism and
religion really well
to make an interesting
and enjoyable piece.
thanks.
~ J
Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years agoYou're getting as bloodthirsty as Me! <laughin'> And yes, I DO believe we're cut from the same cloth. At least in recent topics we are! <wink> This was an appropriately titled piece and well deserving of the 5 I gave it. Really both sultry and sinister - a terrific combination, Sabina!
Vixxx
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agowell heck Sabina, you want to 'See-a-lot?'
I enjoyed your ravaging <grin>
