ZMP~ a tree limb lay ...

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A Tree limb lay,
like thoughts fallen yesterday.

It once pushed leaves,
to shine in the bright sun.
I once had some thoughts,
but now they are gone.

A limbs branching way,
live, wither, fall, decay.
Pieces of broken branch bark,
fragmented thoughts recalled in parts.

Some tree limbs still rise,
reaching to harvest the sun.
Thoughts that still live,
till I lay like a limb.

A Tree limb lay,
like thoughts fallen yesterday.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Smiling within a serenity soaked soul... what else can be said

Du Lac~

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
A zen lullaby...

this one. You always bring out the peaceful in Me with your zen mountain poetry, Art. And this one was no exception. I'm ready to be tucked into bed now <smile>

Tranquil Vixxx

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
As always...

a great blend of both natural and logical elements. Nice metaphors!

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittabout 19 years ago
**5**

WOW!!! another great one. And about tree limbs. This is truly a ZMP!!!

Thankyou ZMA!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I love the expressions

A beautiful thought provoking poem. I love the way you can bring visuals. Beauty in everyday things.

~Macy

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