ZMP~ Ivy to the Sky

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ZMP~ Ivy to the sky

Ivy Knows
which way to go
in order to get to heaven.

Climbing to the sky
it will grow and rise,
seeking the tallest tree living.

Its life is in order
when it clings to another
with hopes of reaching the sky.

But will an Ivy be
discontent and grieve,
if it only reached fence post high?

A wall of Ivy
is loved ones and family
helping each other to rise.

A solid foundation
in climbing relations
is clinging to those who have died.

Some have thorns
and some are poison I warn.
Their Roots touched hell, is a given.

While others climb
on tree bark they rise
Till they reach the heavens.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Extraordinary

Was chatting with Wanton earlier tonight and this small piece came up. Now I see she's stolen my thunder. A superb piece with subtle metaphors, so well composed that it enhances vision as it gently extols, "See this."

Many thanks

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
All I can say is...

that you are, without a doubt, THE zen God!!! WOW!!! My lower jaw is still resting on the keyboard after reading this poem and getting in the way of Me writing the comment. Okay, its been moved... DOUBLE WOW!!!

VERY impressed Vixxx

Ninja NookieNinja Nookiealmost 19 years ago
bravo

ART, your poem rocks! kisses

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
over the top

tons of depth and wonder...as usual ..you wow me...smiles/blue

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nice imagery here.....

and this is my favorite here:

Some have thorns

and some are poison I warn.

Their Roots touched hell, is a given.

******

great piece........don

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