- Non-Erotic Poetry
- ZMP ~ mountain
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ZMP ~ mountain
A wall of beauty
stands before me
in the distant horizon
Flush green base
rock shear face
then snow like white satin
It rises high
into the sky
like the earth is reaching
To kiss a cloud
that hovers round
this mamouth size mountain
- COMMENTS
sweet GA peachesover 18 years ago"like the earth is reaching
To kiss a cloud"...
original in content,
and I love the thought,
planted here,
like a seed ..
and left a new breath
between the lines,
and me.
.......breathe........
-sGp-
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoZMA you know I love ZMPS but I don't see the ZEN in this one? I am not smart. -Scotty
Anonymousover 18 years agoamid the cluster green mountains..it may have been said before...but ,,not by
U>...UBOK...blue
Anonymousover 18 years ago"like the earth is reaching
To kiss a cloud"
I have a difficult time with end rhyme that falls into predictability. However I really like this line! I had to read the poem twice to put it together, with the verse change inbetween. Those enjambments get me every time :)
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