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- ZMP ~ rippled waters
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ZMP ~ rippled waters
My Mind is like
a pool of water,
sometimes my thoughts
are clear and calmer
My emotions show
like the ripples that grow.
when words or thoughts,
mimic a stones throw.
When words are thrown
like a hand full of pebbles
the splashing and crashing
creates a lot of ripples.
Eager to calm my mind
you would think is simple
like using my hands
to try and stop the ripples.
I seem to make more
the more I tried,
my hand made waves
and they multiplied.
It would have been better
to let them subside
others take over
eventually with time.
Reflect the stillness
when it can be done.
But thoughts and words
like stones are thrown.
There is beauty in
fibrant waters dimples,
thoughts are living circles
passionate waves and ripples.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoYou are growing Art. Your zen has great power and is smashing down walls of limiting mind work. I see your soul opening rippling out and touching others with the power of words..
du~
Anonymousover 18 years agolove the way you paint me into the scenes of you waters...nice one Art...blue
dcpoet44over 18 years agoand this is my fave spot:
My emotions show
like the ripples that grow.
when words or thoughts,
mimic a stones throw.
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you may want to take a look at crashing though. it may not fit appropriately with ripples as it would with waves. i might not be seeing something as intended though. nicely done art......don
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoWOW!!! 2 ZMP poems in 1 day!! & this one is even more ZEN then the 1st 1!!!
I wish I knew you how do you do it!!!
ZMA You write right! Ha Ha a joke!!!
LeBrozover 18 years agoYour vivid imagery
like your thoughts knows no bounds,
and like the ripples on the pond,
go on and on
