zmp ~ swept away

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To cross the river's width
is like life's descent
caught in the current
of the moment
grasping for our last breath.

A wind lightly blows
and change is imposed
like a leaf swept away
no more does it lay
away in the breeze it goes.

A drop of water is like a soul
melting into the unknown
in an endless sea
of thoughtless dreams
existance is a life that flows

Like the day love's found
the heart song's sound
where dreams are clay
reality's a wheel away
till swept away in buried ground

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Like watching one's life,

helplessly pulled;

bobbing in the flotsam and jetsam of

existence's raging tide.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
am seeing such

shifts in diversity...always nice to see your gears moving...luv2ufromtheblue

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
SPELLBOUND.. and CAPTIVE

'tis where you lead this southern girl, very wonderful words you use to capture and drink in the thoguhts of your readers, oh, it was like a fine wine, and I sipped, until I was tingly ...... *****. -sGp-

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Hey Huni

Your poem was mentioned in Saturdays Reviews,

Thanks for sharing.

~ JC

I may have gushed a bit lol <grin>

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
**5**

A REALLY GREAT ZMP!!! ONE OF THE BEST!!! THANK YOU ZMA!!!