- Non-Erotic Poetry
- zodiac
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lion at the watering hole
stripes and spots and tufts
disappear into the grass
on quick hooves and paws
when leo comes
she becomes a
solitary pool
for quiet reflection
aqua quivers
feeling his fierce image
on her surface
they merge
waiting
pink tongue touches liquid twin
ripples circle
as he drinks
in deep
licks paws
looks past
leaves her
waiting for that thirst
and momentary identity
- COMMENTS
SeattleRainabout 20 years agoAuthorThere was something missing, I was holding back, you are very perceptive. I have heard you are an intelligent, talented woman. Tomorrow, check out deeper into the zodiac for another piece of the story, if you have time. Thank you for the comments-- Seattle
Lauren Hyndeabout 20 years agoGood description, but I missed something more. There's a tension waiting beneath the surface of that pond, a poem.
Liarabout 20 years agoSuch a lively decription. I could almost feel the sun shining down on me.
