- Loving Wives
- 6-4=3
- Page 12
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"Hey Ryan," she smiled. "Do a good job. My hubby likes a clean office to bring customers into for meetings. He's going to run the company when Daddy retires, so maybe he can get you a promotion."
Melanie, even heavily pregnant was far more beautiful than I'd ever seen her. I wanted to kick myself.
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Ben
I guess that good things come to good people. I'm happier now than I ever thought I could be. There's no great secret, it's simple math.
Take six people...well two couples and the people that one partner in each couple cheated with. Subtract the four cheaters and that leaves you three people. And no my math isn't wrong when those two people are pregnant.
The end
- COMMENTS
TrainerOfBimbos3 months agoGood story. Not quite enough pathos for me in regards to Sandy, who obviously went off the deep end. Ryan, for his part was always a scumbag right up until the end but I felt like Sandy was just damaged goods who let people use her and got in over her head. The sad thing is, with as much as she loved Ben, if she had told him about her past and they had gotten her help, it probably never would have happened. Just goes to show - there should be no secrets in a marriage.
Anonymous4 months agoGreat read. Might have been a little more interested in the psychosis of Sandy there especially more towards the end. I felt like I wanted a couple more sentences or paragraphs on her unraveling. Would be interesting to know if she had gotten a final conversation with Ben in, could she have gotten help or any sense of self awareness before becoming a stone killer ?
Harvey89104 months agoThis was a great story, full of twists and turns, and it is a five-star story, for sure. It seems like in the end the good guy wins which I love in a good story. Very well-written and very entertaining. Great job!!!
Anonymous9 months agoI enjoyed the story very much, as I do most of StangStar’s work, but I do have one negative criticism.
I understand why she was talking to someone on social media, because she didn’t have a very happy marriage, but he was not in the same position when the story started.
Fortunately, it all worked out for this couple, but connecting inappropriately with people on social media has been the bane of many a marriage.
Just sayin….
oldpantythief9 months agoReading some of the comments was almost as much fun as reading the story, which I enjoyed very much, five stars worth. Like a lot of commenters, I wish that Tabitha and Joe Bob could have got back together, after all he also cheated on her. There was one bit that had me confused for a while, when Ryan went to see Mel after the restraining order, he was in the house trying to sweet talk Melanie. How did he get in with the locks being changed and why didn't she call the police on him?
Well, there were a lot of fucked up people in this story and some of them got what they deserved.
