"We'll have some time to ourselves, Bill. I promise. I want this to work for us too. I just want to go a bit easy for a while until we get to know each other again. I remember that very first night when we made love, Bill. You were the one who told me that we needed to take the time to know each other. You wanted a love like your parents have. I remember that as if it were yesterday," she said quietly.
Bill reached out to her and took her hand as he drove carefully through the subdivision streets. It was the gentle squeeze that acknowledged Zena's truth. He smiled to himself. The notoriously cautious man had thrown his caution to the wind and had no regrets whatsoever. Everything was going to be just fine. This time he was certain.
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series deserves a higher score
a most enjoyable & entertaining story
remarkably well written , interesting & engaging plot.
fantastic story of an ordinary person , from an ordinary background , in an ordianry town doing the best they can to improve & advance in life , with decency , integrity & honesty . having the most atrocious luck in love and relationships.
as a cautionary tale and a warning to all , both male & female .
Trust but Verify.
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The notoriously cautious man had thrown his caution to the wind and had no regrets whatsoever. Everything was going to be just fine. This time he was certain.
( as famous last words go those are truly epic,)more...
Very Nice!
While it seems pretty obvious, a more definite (happy) conclusion to Bill and Zena's relationship.
I don't think so !
Good riddance to this pompous ass.
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