A Cuckold Earns His Horns Pt. 01

Thanks Nitro70652

Nitro70652, your comment is interesting and has me thinking about what I've left out.

This is a true story and I wrote it as much to capture what happened because the night was so intense it's hard to keep events clear; the chronology, the images, it all blurs together so this has been a useful way to make order out of that chaos.

She wanted - and still does - this relationship. She was - and still is (as am I) - careful about how it could jeopardize our marriage, but we have a D/s, open relationship that we navigate very carefully. I'm wondering what you'd like to see in terms of her take on it.

As for the conditions I set, again, they're real and I know it's perhaps not in keeping with what we've come to expect of a bull in cuckold erotica but they stem from the same care she and I take to preserve our relationship: I didn't know the guy when we first started negotiating but I knew what would work for her and for me. I'm pretty alpha and I know how my mind and body work and if we started out as buddies, I wouldn't have been able to navigate that transition. No one would have enjoyed themselves. If he had been an asshole, he'd have been out on his ass.

I was really impressed by the care he took in the initial discussions, a detail that I omitted in order to keep things moving. His approach was actually perfect for us: Thoughtful, interested, intelligent, he wanted to make sure he understood what made each of us tick. So I told him. He makes an excellent bull and an excellent fit for us, as a result. But that's us. Everyone's different.

Plus, hey: While I like stories where the bull takes charge, relegating the husband/boyfriend to the guest room, etc, it gets a bit tired going down the same path. Here's something different. Definitely not everyone's cup of tea but that's ok. Again, it's just porn.

All that said, I'm leaving the commenting open to all - unfuckable hate nerds included (not you Nitro70652 :) they're the ones whose comments get deleted) - in hopes that I'll get more useful feedback like yours that I can use to improve this story.

Thanks again for the feedback and the vote.

Mollymore...

well written although.....

Far be it from Me to dictate to anyone how things should work within a relationship. I find it odd that for a submissive sissy faggot cuckold who wants this apparently more than his "mistress"..... he sure has an awful lot of rules and direction how it should go and how the "bull" is allowed to behave/control things. Just find it hard to believe that any Dominant bull would come into such a session being directed by the lowest ranking person in the room. Again, just My opinion.
4 stars so far.more...

Can't wait for part 2, please continue soon. Thanks

Please continue, great story so far.

great story

Sadly I am one of the quiet majority that don't usually vote or make comments but I am enjoying the story I just feel maybe it's taking a bit long for me getting to the best part hurry with part two please and good luck 😊 (sorry about punctuation can't find it old technophobe)more...

Hiya. I've been mulling over whether to leave the many comments alone because as I said, it's just porn and hey, you don't have to read it. I read the guidelines for literotica, though, which basically state that comments should relate to the story and shouldn't be offensive, etc. As for the offensive comments, there have been plenty, but that goes with the territory, either as a writer or a queer, two categories I gaily fit into.

Anyway, I deleted a number of the comments just now, including some of the supportive ones, because they weren't relevant to the story. I really don't mind vitriol directed at me but flame wars are boring. Want to give me 1 star? No problem, but please do so because the writing sucked. And let me know why it sucked.

A note about that: Want to hate me because I love sucking cock and eating pussy, especially in a cuckolding scenario? Go ahead, you're not alone. I'm not for everyone. But if that's the basis of your comment it will be deleted because it's irrelevant.

For example, I'm curious why I should have left out the reference to Keith Moon. That's an interesting comment. @whackdoodle's and @vulcan's comments likewise have me curious and they're relevant to the story. At least they read it (by the way, thanks for the critique, guys, hope I didn't scar you :) ).

That's about it. I thought I owed even the trolls an explanation.

And yes, anonymous, you do recognize the ad. It's all real. Names changed for obvious reasons but it's all real.

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