After that night, I pretty much knew I'd never get to feel my mom like that again. That was, until the following Friday, when she asked me for another one. I readily agreed. Who knows, maybe something more might happen.
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Wow
Just wanted to say...your writing style is just tremendous. Incredibly vivid and captivating. I've read more books than probably 100 people combined, but I've never read such a vivid, compelling story that actually made you feel like you were there until I read yours. Pat Conroy, Diana Gabaldon and Sidney Sheldon are among my favorite authors, but I will add you to the list. Just an amazing story!!more...
I am hoping you meant the sirens from mythology
rather than a fire engine?
"a voice like a siren"
lol
Nice build up
Next chapter please! Good writing!
More Please
Would love to see another chapter! Great story so far!
Sequel coming.
I did not know if I would continue this story, but the demand for a sequel has been pretty big, so I'm now working on the next story for Dana and her mother. Should be up in a few days.
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