I wanted to die.
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Too easy
I'm enjoying the story but the food source being cut off knocking out a demon lord and rendering him completely helpless? That's a bit too... deus ex machine.
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Love how this is going!
I was very pleased to find out you have written more! Hopefully, we will have the full story soon!
oh boy, a baby is coming. Hopefully Anita can somehow lives through...wishful thinking..?
Great Story
Love your story! I think it might be more expected that a demon lord would become more livid than sad when faced with his loves death, but it's your story and I found his concern for Anita kind of adorable. He was sad, but not in a weak way. Anyways, great job and I can't wait to read more!more...
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