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The End
PS. Please vote and/or comment. Happy Halloween!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agoYou NEED to finish this story!!!!!! Im hooked and super excited to see where it may go!!!! Sad at the ending was really expecting almost horror story! Gahhhhhh please finish it! when you do please email me mz_masters@cox.net my name is Heather!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousover 12 years agoI thought the build up, the masks and the book were fantastic. For some reason I hear "Hotel California" while reading it.
bbonz1over 12 years agoAuthorSorry if you felt it ended too soon. I think so too. But, as my next paying manuscript is due soon, I needed to cut this one short and get it posted. I hope to continue with additional chapters for this after the manuscript is sent to the editor. Thanks for all the feedback!
AzanianHeatover 12 years agoLove your writing style.
The way you took your time in building up the swirling, growing debauchery - from concept to practice - was fantastic. And it's because it was all so beautifully set up that I would've like the party to play out and have something significant take place.
The whole story, all along, had felt like a journey towards... something. Phil was taking everyone - them and us - somewhere. Suddenly dropping it where you did left it feeling unfinished.
Still gave it five stars, though. One thing that cannot be disputed is your talent.
:)
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