A Double Standard 'Revisited'

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I really wasn't going to put my ending on this story. I received approximately 58 alternate endings from the readers. Many of you gave good reasons for your endings. I read all of them so I know most won't agree with mine. Some readers even called me names for not finishing it. So I will give an alternate ending from where I left off. That's what I asked of the readers so I will do the same. For anyone who has not read the story 'Double Standard' it's a must to understand the ending. Thanks goes out to 'Techsan' for his editing of this story.

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I beginning with the last half page of the story:

"Harry, I know you have cheated on me for years. I remember finding condom wrappers in your pockets even though you had a vasectomy years ago. You suits smelled of perfumes that were not mine. Even cum stains in your underwear. I turned my back on your affairs hoping that you would stop. You never did. That is why I made up this affair lie to you. I wanted you to get a taste of how I felt all these past years. I was hoping that after you heard my made-up story that you would say that you forgave me. That you still wanted me as your wife. But that didn't happen, Harry. Instead you grabbed your whiskey and ran to the bedroom."

"Miriam, I was having nightmares seeing you with other men. I had to get up and throw up it bothered me so bad."

"How do you think I felt whenever I knew you had one of your flings. I threw up many times too, Harry, knowing that the sex you were giving these women belonged to me, Harry. But last week when the stranger called and said you were fucking his wife and he had the pictures to prove it, how do you think I felt, Harry. You have now brought your sexual affairs home to roost. That's when I said enough is enough."

"God, I'm so sorry, Miriam, I'll do whatever it takes to make it up to you."

"That's why I gave you the affair test, Harry. So you could still say you love me even after I had the affair. You failed, Harry. After all the affairs you have had you wanted me to forgive you. But when it was me having one affair for revenge against you, you needed to think about it. Sounds like a double standard, Harry. I believe a lot of men use that standard."

I had tears in my eyes. She was right. I wanted her to forgive me but was I ready to forgive her? I guess I did have a 'Double Standard.' I told her I needed to face Steve, that is why I came to see him. I was devastated knowing he had sex with her. I brought the gun not knowing whether I was going to use it or not. I remember her saying Steve talked about blackmailing her for sex and it really bothered me. I was ready to go to prison for shooting Steve if necessary.

Miriam looked at me and said, "Harry, yesterday you had the choice to save our marriage and was unable to come to a decision. Well, Harry, I'm making the decision for us both now. I choose that we . . . ."The End (except for comments) (New Ending starts here)

"I choose that we stay together and do our best to work it out."

She walked up to me to put her arms around me. I stuck my hand out to stop her.

"What's the matter, Harry? I thought you wanted us to stay together." She looked worried.

"I did, Miriam, there was nothing I wanted more than to get back with you. But that was before all your lies, Miriam. I'm not a cuckold, a man to be stepped on and laughed at."

"What do you mean, Harry? Steve and I explained everything to you. It's over now, Harry, it's over. Nothing happened."

"Stop lying, Miriam, please stop lying. You have always been a wonderful woman but you have always been a very vengeful person. During our whole marriage if things didn't go your way you always got even."

"What are you saying, Harry?"

"I'm saying that if you found condoms in my pockets years ago and never said anything to me about it, you would have done something to get even with me. I don't recollect any getting even, Miriam. One time when you smelled perfume on me and I explained it was an elderly customer who hugged me and the scent stayed, you didn't believe me. You needed proof so I took you to meet the elderly woman so you could satisfy yourself that I was being truthful."

Miriam was looking more nervous.

"The night you said you overheard a woman in my room. Why did you not ever say anything to me, to my face. Maybe I was at a party, maybe there were a number of people in my room, and maybe it could have been the TV set. You automatically assumed the worst, Miriam. Why, Miriam? Why would you think the worst and not even mention it to me? I'll tell you why, Miriam, you were having affairs. I also believe you had affairs with Steve."

Steve went to stand up until I said, "Sit your sorry ass back down, Steve, or I'll shoot your fucking nuts off." Steve sat back down without saying a word.

"Then there's my good friend and brother-in-law, Steve, who wouldn't even tell me that my wife suspected me of cheating on her. And why wouldn't my good friend say anything? He says because my wife asked him not to. Wow, what a good reason not to tell your best friend something as important as being suspected of cheating."

I looked over at Steve while still holding onto the pistol. "Well, brother-in-law, you get one chance to be honest. Did you fuck Miriam?"

Steve looked over at a crying Miriam and his distraught wife. "Yes," he answered.

"Yes, what? You wife fucker."

"Yes, I fucked your wife. I fucked Miriam."

"For how long, Steve?" Miriam started to butt in... "Shut up, slut wife, I want Steve to answer. His life depends on the truth."

"For years," was Steve's reply. Miriam burst out in tears.

"Why did you stop? I'm only asking you these questions once."

"Betty caught us in the act." Steve replied.

"Okay, Betty, your turn and it better be the truth."

Betty was in tears as she spoke. "One night when we still lived near you Steve went to check on Miriam like he always did while you were away. I happened to be in the neighborhood and walked in on them. They were on your couch." Betty was now crying. I waited for her to get her breath back.

Betty continued, "Miriam was saying, 'Fuck me, Steve, fuck me,' as she rode his lap. When they saw me they stopped. We all had a huge argument. I stopped talking to Miriam for a long time. Eventually for our mom's sake we finally agreed to at least be civil to each other. It put a big strain on Steve and my relationship. We separated for a few months and eventually got back together. That's why we moved to Peoli, to get away from you and Miriam. We heard very little from Miriam until she called today saying you were coming over with a gun."

"You see, Miriam, I gave it some thought all the way over here. If you would have told me the truth, I could have forgiven you. No 'Double Standard.' If you would have never said anything, I probably would have never known. But no, Miriam, you had to try to extract that last ounce of revenge against me. That vengeful nature that I mentioned you had. As I told you yesterday, I could have had the new territory and hardly ever stayed away at night. We could have been together. But that was not good enough, was it, Miriam?"

Miriam was sitting with tears in her eyes. "We can still do that, Harry."

"I'll admit to having one night stands Miriam. Yes, I did it. No love, no affairs. I don't know how many, Miriam, I didn't keep track or have a little black book. I wasn't out to hurt you. I always hoped you would never find out. But, Miriam, if you did and told me you knew, I probably would have stopped and even changed jobs to save our marriage. But you knew and said nothing. All so you could go get yourself fucked and blame it on me. Isn't that right, Miriam?"

Miriam looked at me and said, "Harry, we can still work this out. Let's go home and talk and salvage our marriage. If you love me like you say you do, I know we can work it out."

"Are you willing to tell me about all your affairs during our marriage, Miriam? Are you willing to tell me why you chose to have other men instead of coming to me and trying to work things out? How far are you willing to go and tell me the truth, Miriam? How many of my friends and associates have you bedded down? Are you willing to tell me everything, Miriam?"

"Harry, why bring up all the pains of the past? Can't we get by that and start anew? You now know about the affair with Steve. Isn't that enough?"

"No, Miriam, I only know because of Betty and of your lies. For all I know you could have been selling yourself or fucking my friends behind my back during our whole marriage. How do I face anyone anymore unless I know who they are?"

"Harry, what about our kids, our family. If we separate, one of us has to talk to the kids. What are we going to tell them? That we both had affairs on each other. Please, Harry, let's just go home and work things out. I still love you."

I almost had to laugh. "Still love me, what does that mean? That you will continue to let me support you? That you are done having affairs and will only make love with me from now on? What does 'still love you' mean, Miriam? Have you ever really loved me?"

I looked over at Betty. "Betty, you're the only one here I feel sorry for. If you were smart you would have left the bastard of a husband you have sitting there. Steve, if Betty didn't still love a prick like you I would kill you. It's men like you who think they can always have their cake and eat it too. I ought to just shoot your sorry ass for spite. In fact get on your knees and beg for your life, you sorry bastard."

Miriam yelled out, "Harry, please, you can't shoot him."

Betty cried, "Please don't, Harry. I beg you, please don't shoot him."

"It's Steve I want to hear beg or I promise you he's a dead man."

Steve got on his knees in front of me and started crying, "Please don't shoot me. I shouldn't have had sex with your wife. I'm so sorry, I promise never to do it again. Please don't shoot me," as he continued to cry."

I just pistol whipped him one time and knocked him over. The girls screamed and Betty ran to Steve's side. "Please don't hit him again, Harry, please."

"Well, Miriam, what happens now? I really did love you and wanted to spend the rest of my days with you. But not anymore. I've lost all my respect for you. I know it would be impossible to ever trust you again. Even if you told me the truth about all the affairs you had. I don't know if I could even show my face to my friends anymore. Looking back and joking with the guys at the club I could see why they were laughing whenever I left the room. They were laughing at me, weren't they, Miriam?"

"Please, Harry, they meant nothing to me. It's you I love. It was just the sex. I was lonely."

"So you did bed down my friends. I just took a wild guess. Well, Miriam, I have no life left. I could hardly face my own family knowing their mother's a slut. I can't face any of my so called friends since my wife thought she needed to have sex with them. That leaves me nothing, Miriam. It doesn't give me a lot of reason to live. The only thing I have left is revenge against you, Miriam. But what is the worst revenge I can have against you? I can shoot you, or shoot Steve which would give me pleasure."

Betty yelled out, "Please, no, Harry. I'll do anything if you spare Steve."

"Will you fuck me, Betty? Will you strip down right now, right here in front of your sister and husband and fuck me?"

Steve yelled out, "You bastard, you touch her and I'll kill you."

"I have the gun, asshole. Well, either strip or your husband's a dead man. I won't say it again," as I cocked the pistol.

Miriam said, "No, you can do it, Harry. You're out of your mind."

"Shut the fuck up, Miriam. You fucked her husband God knows how many times. So it would be a great little revenge to get some of your little sister's pussy. Well, Betty it's up to you. Who lives, who dies?"

Betty started taking off her clothes. She was down to her bra and panties. Damn she looked good. She came over to the chair where I was sitting while her husband still lay on the floor in front of us. I pistol whipped him again just because I wanted to. He crawled over to the couch and sat on the floor next to Miriam. I told him if he interfered I would shoot him the next time.

I told Betty to strip the rest of the way. She took off her bra and then slowly removed her panties. I could tell she was really nervous but didn't seemed scared. Probably deep down she wanted a little revenge of her own.

I told her to kneel in front of me and undo my pants, which she did. She pulled out my cock and I told her to get it harder. She put the head in her mouth and it begin to get bigger. I had to hold the gun in one hand which made it a bit inconvenient. Steve and Miriam just looked on, neither saying anything. Betty was really working on my cock. I told her she could climb on or finish me with her mouth.

She looked over at her husband and sister and then climbed up on my very stiff rod. She made the choice and they both knew it. Her pussy was wet, very wet. She was riding me and I was feeling her breast with my free hand.

I asked her to talk to me while we fucked.

"I love your cock, Harry. I've wanted it ever since I caught Steve fucking Miriam. God, it feels good."

"Who's cock do you prefer, Betty, mine or Steve's?

"Yours, Harry, it's so much thicker. This is so exciting fucking you in front of those two. Cum in me, Harry. Let my husband see your cum shooting into his wife's pussy."

I came hard right into my naked sister-in-law's pussy. She pulled up just enough to see the cum coming back out of her and down my shaft. She then leaned over and kissed me and said, "Thank you, I've wanted to get even for a long time." Then she got off my cock and walked over to her husband and said "Now we're even."

I called a crying Miriam over and told her she had one choice and one choice only. To clean me up or I would shoot her. No discussion!

She got between my legs and cleaned up her sister's mess. She was gagging at times but continued to clean up my cock. When she was through she tucked my soft cock back into my pants.

"What now, Harry? What happens now? You've ruined all our lives."

I told her to go sit next to her naked sister. Then I told them that I would not shoot any of them because I'm a man of my word. They all did what I asked to save their life. The only problem now is that they would have to find a way to explain it to our children and the police.

"The ultimate revenge."

Than I took the pistol, put it in my mouth and pulled the trigger.

The End

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AllNigherAllNigher4 days ago

Couldn't finish it. Went down crazy lw road. Just nonsense to make sure she was much worse than him to satisfy the crowd.

Reading the comments, I can't understand how the guy gets a pass regardless of what the others did.... Shows the double standard I guess.... Point proven dude.

AstordatairAstordatairabout 1 month ago

Suicide as a revenge? Nope. I like your writing, but I did not enjoy the ending of this second part. I gave it a good score though, because i clearly did not leave me indifferent!

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2about 1 month ago

There was no going back to the MC's marriage with Miriam. His having one night stands with strangers does not compare to having ongoing affairs with Friends of his.

And the suicide ending was horrific. It was an cheap and easy way to end the story, but there was no pain, angst, anger or hate communicated to the reader to justify this ending.

Also, he left no note or reason why he killed himself, so it would be up to the three witnesses to explain what happened. His children or other family members would never understand why he did it.

They were all to some degree shitty characters, but frankly, Steve and Miriam were truly vile. Intentionally out to hurt the MC and possibly destroy him, which they did. And I sure don't understand why Betty never said anything to him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

This is the worst ending of all. Why? He cheated his readers and introduced character elements that were the opposite of those in part one. It would have been better left unfinished.

fredbrownfredbrownabout 2 months ago

Part 2 is a rather dismal little ending that I can't see happening. I'm not an author and it's not my story but - yeah, sure .......

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