A Dozen Oysters

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Abelard7
Abelard7
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My part in the initiation was to fuck Jessica last, after she been had by all the others, but I was not to come in her. The others had been trusted to shoot their loads invisibly, lodged inside Jessica's sheath. I was not a trusted member, my ejaculation had to be witnessed, and therefore on the outside.

I wrapped my hand around my oily shaft and wanked furiously. I had timed it perfectly, a dozen or so vigorous strokes had my cock gushing like a fireman's hose. Plentiful and powerful, my spurts not only splashed onto Jessica's proffered arse, but onto her back and over her head to the floor in front of her.

There was a soft round of applause and murmurs of approval as I staggered back, feeling filleted. Jess's two 'minders' helped her to her feet and supported her as she was led unsteadily to clean herself up.

Katherine kissed me gently on the mouth and murmured;

"Welcome to the club."

Abelard7
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sterile and boring

Coral bovine sex for mass meat encounter on astride island peculiar fantasy.

dutchpantyraiderdutchpantyraiderover 11 years ago
nice!

Nice story, a good read! I like stuff like this. It's not unlike my own story "Mark & Demi Join Intimate Club". Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good but could have been better

You touched on some intriguing elements of a story, but never really followed through on any of them. His reaction -- going soft -- could have been dealt with in a lot greater depth, for example. And her interest turning into mere endurance is another aspect that could have been gone into a bit more. The psychology of something like this would be a good area to deal with; as they say, the brain is the largest sex organ. As it is, the biggest impression left at the end of the story is one of discomfort and unease, which is itself something worthy of exploration but was left unexplored.

I guess the first comment's reference is to "Eyes Wide Shut"? I don't really remember the plot anymore. :-)

It was also a bit hard to get into the story because of a few minor but consistent problems in punctuation and word use. Check up on how to punctuate and capitalize dialogue; remember the difference between "its" and "it's"; and use semicolons instead of commas in compound sentences where there is no conjunction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wet

Hot story! The images almost made me come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I remember the movie.

Let me guess, Tom Cruise alter ego. Right?

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