Laughing she repeated, "I said 'that will work out perfect ... daddy.' You're going to be a father again!"
JP wrapped Vicki in his arms and pulled her closer as they watched the sunset. "I can't think of better way to end a Dream Vacation."
"Neither can I."
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leftists: "censorship is evil! unless we're in control of what gets censored, of course...then it's 'establishing a hate-free, tolerant atmosphere where goodthinking people can gather without being harassed' instead of simple, evil censorship. Duh! Only b
To clarify: rapperbs mentioned someone called "twocrows" in a manner that implied that persons comment was negative or critical in tone. However, when I went to look for the comment in question...it had mysteriously vanished. I liked this chapter. I read it first because it was the lowest scored one, and I didn't want to get sucked in, only to be irritated by a poor quality, or otherwise objectionable, final/most recent chapter. I found myself wondering why the chapter was scored so low. No new plot elements were introduced, at least not really, unless you count the hotel bit, and I can't see why that'd bring down the rating...so I scratched my head. And while I was pondering, I made my way to the comments, where, lo and behold, lay the answer. You censored a member. Possibly many. Hell, MY comment is prolly gonna go poof, hence the power of screenshot for evidentiary reasons. Anyway. Lit members...don't like being censored. And I bet whichever one(s) you attempted to gag...went and exercised their "freedom of friendship" and hammered you with a vote brigade. Stalinist tactics only work when the other fellow can't fight back effectively. Assuming that *is* what happened in this case, and I'm not just indulging in wildly inaccurate supposition and guesswork, of course. Toodles.
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reading is fun
I like the way you write no words missed spelled just great reading
A real pleasure!!!
Loved this series! Hope it isn' t the last one...so many possibilities!
Awesome series
Excellent series, I just completed it and loved every word. I hope that this is not the true end... looking forward to new chapters.
Excellent series!
I dont know what twocrows is talking about.... Ignore him great series! I just finished ch 5 and bookmarked your page to wait for ch 6. Nice surprise for new years! I thought the barn scene was was a nice addition! looking for
ward to reading more of your stories, i haven't read them all yet.more...
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