Moving closer Dan placed his hand on her face and brought his lips to hers. "In that case, I accept."
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pregnant while lactating,
soon after giving birth? Possible? Sure. Probable? Hell no, I'm afraid. Maybe with multiple encounters, but the first one wouldn't do it. Other than that nail-meet-chalkboard bit, it was a very steamy story. Nice use of adverbs and adjectives.
-Anubelore :)more...
Not quite a 5, better than a 4
Contrary to the one comment, the woman's response is entirely plausible.
Elegant sluts are a wonder to behold.
OK
YOU HAVE A GOOD STORY BUT I JUST COULDN'T GET INTO THE BAD ASS CHARACTER. I THINK IT MORE LIKELY THEM, WIFE WOULD HAVE BEEN NEEDING TENDER TREATMENT, EVEN IF FOR ONLY ONE NIGHT.
Good Start!!
Let's see where you take us...and the characters.
Great story
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