Julie does the same we all have cum drooling out our mouths and we all laugh. We push each other into the pond to get the sweat and cum off us. We all got out wet.
The girls said, "We will wait to get dry."
Chapter 11
Josh said, "We will pedal ourselves dry."
"Nude," the girls said.
Josh said, "sure you girls look sexy flaunt it."
They looked at each other and said, "together what the fuck let's go."
Josh whispered to Julie, "I told you I was going to watch you pedal that cute ass of yours." Julie gives me a kiss and wiggles her ass just as they reached their bikes.
They looked great ahead of us with their tits bouncing and their asses moving as they pedaled, they kept looking back and laughing seeing our cocks swaying in the breeze. We reached the road and stopped decide to go to our house Josh reached for clothes the girls took off with our clothes and started riding away.
We biked a mile down the road nude. No cars came along but we were all glad to reach Josh and Julie's house. Once in the house Bill and Brenda started to get dressed while Julie and Josh stayed naked.
Brenda looked at Julie and Josh's big cock and says, "Fuck it" and removes her clothes.
Julie says, "Looks like lover boy is always last."
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Really?
6'3" and 145? If he's 6'3", his skeleton alone weighs at least 100 pounds, even if he's skinny as fuck. At 145, you died of hunger 20 pounds ago.
Other than that, great story.
@skyink93
....because we all know straight men are all that matter in the Sci-Fi category....HA!
And you can't talk about fifth grader grammar. I just found this in your fake rape story:
"Please don't? Please, please please just fuck the hell out of me?" Jen had her head down almost like she was dejected.
What is with the question marks? Don't you know the difference between an exclamation point and a question mark? It sound ridiculous when the awesome Gary Stu is being the best lover EVER to multiple women without breaking a sweat. Or...I guess that is how all CA Valler girls talk, which makes it worse...ew.
Last thing: if you have EVER wanked off to anything in SciFi other than dick-in-pussy missionary, you are a hypocrite and sorry, boy on boy or girl on girl does not trump a SciFi theme. You can go give a bison bull a rimjob and love it, since you're so scared if the D.more...
I tried...
Really, I gave it some effort, trying to read this crap. First... FFS, any fifth grade kid should have better grammar. Second... You may be gay, or bi, or whatever the hell you call yourself, but most heterosexual men don't care to read about shit like this. Put this crap you imagine as a story in the gay category WHERE IT BELONGS.more...
Thanks
Thank you for the comments. most of your critics are valid. This was my first serious attempt and it is currently 6 part series I have put in up to part 4 and hope the story evolves better. A volunteer editor would be great so far I have had no replies to emails maybe now that a part is posted I will have better luck. Spelling I spent many days reviewing but apparently not enough. As for the character Josh I did a poor Job of what was in my head to put on paper this guy was so abused through his childhood by classmates and his sister sister setting him up to get beat up only to cum home and be disciplined for having blood on his clothes or torn clothes.This bitterness keeps popping up even though it is not the person he wants to be. Calling guys a fag was also part of this it was to raise a certain emotion nothing to do with being bisexual or gay. Apparently I have not portrayed that well. Thanks for the comments and I will try to improve thanks to your comments.more...
Uh...
Please learn English. Please also learn how dialogue works. Please also learn how perspective works. Once you got that down, come back and post again.
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