Why did she have a diamond? Why was it gleaming red and not the rainbow of colors like Elizabeth's? Why didn't he know about this?
"Dad," he called out mentally, "is there something you want to tell me?"
(To be continued)
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I gave this a five because of the very arousing action going on. I feel this is a site for original erotica to amuse, arouse and entertain me.[ not me alone] Shit I'm married to a teacher, my lover was a teacher, my daughters... etc. sooooo. if you are seeking good writing skills lend a hand and edit for the people who need it! At first I certainly did.
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I gave this a "1" because the horrible spelling and grammar made it often not understandable
I gave this a "1" because the horrible spelling and grammar made it often not understandable, despite many good and interesting ideas.
shuttering versus shuddering--they are not the same
Read the title. An editor would make a great series easier to read.
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even read these before posting them? Some words you use correctly and then incorrectly soon after, so I assume you know correct spelling and grammar. Please get someone to proof read your stuff before posting them. You have a good story buried under the apparent lack of knowledge of the English language.more...
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