A Good Servant Ch. 10

Amazing.

I love the story and the characters. Great balance in the narrative, which works on so many levels. You are are an amazing storyteller. I can't wait for the next installment. Thank you for this bit of escapism.more...

Liked the extra long chapter ;)

This is really getting better and better. and better.. Your characters are enthralling, I keep wondering what's going to happen to each one of them.. Dion .. I actually was feeling his confusion ..I enjoy every character, every scene..I get lost in.. I sure would purchase this 'erotic story' it should be published..! I look forward to reading your next chapter..you put a lot of effort in your writing..it flows....';) Keep on typing ;)more...

you can dive in

Thanks Laura, nothing has changed. From the very beginning the story continues to take me away, waiting for an update (pls longer chapters ;.) ). I love the pace and interruptions of the various stories. Your way of writing ... like someone said before… sweeps you along.
The one thing... I expected more details about the place and conditions of Cory’s interrogation – I imagine it more violent/humiliating and in the contrast between the parts....the trainers acting more hard ... Cory and Lucas speaking together without words – their non verbal communication… this is what it would’ve get more exciting…the whole thing is too calm for the extraordinary event.
I’m waiting for news from Xav and Ayn… to make some summersaults.. it's all up to u! Take us to the edge...
Rgs Chrismore...

You're writing really is amazing. The way you've split the story into three bits works really well. I always get so angry so I realise I've finished a chapter, I just want more. I really hope you start writing longer chapters (especially John and Dion). I can't wait to see what's going to happen to all of our fellas. Just keep writing and improving and you'll be in that hall of fame in no time.more...

This is truly some of the hottest gay erotica I have read in a long time...Cannot wait for the next chapters.

I am tempted to put it aside for a while, so I can read it all in one swoop, but I fear I may go on sensory overload!!

Well done Laura, you are keep a lot of us gay boys quite happy...I know, I for one was wishing I was Cory...but now I wouldn't mind being Dion and trying to break through the tough facade of John!

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