A Good Servant Ch. 11

byLauraSFox©

Dion coughed.

"It's ok," John made a move to stop him, but Dion shook his head.

"No, it's fine, I have to tell you this. Well, he fucked me in front of all the others. I thought something was broken inside when he finally came. I had no more voice or tears in me. And, when I thought the ordeal was over, he ... he just told the others to have their fun with me. Fun," he repeated. "Now that's a word I don't really get. It was probably fun for them. When the Master of the house eventually came, and saw what happened, he just told me to get up and get cleaned up. It was my 'welcome to Drena' party, as Antoine said."

"Fuck me," John murmured under his breath.

"It's not all."

"Shit, not all?"

"No. For the time spent in Drena, Antoine found pure bliss in torturing me almost every day. I was his personal toy. At least, he did not let others fuck me. Not too often. But he was really creative in making everything dreadful for me. One of his favorite pastimes was to choke me while fucking me, until I passed out."

"Oh," John started massaging his forehead. "No wonder you were so scared when coming here. You thought you'd get jumped."

"Yes. But I liked you. Right from the start. I felt safe next to you. So, I want to try it with you. No, not just 'try'. I want it to work."

John got up from the couch. "I want to get out a little," he said in a somber voice.

"Why?" Dion asked alarmed. Was John rejecting him now? After learning he had been nothing but a fuck toy for a sadistic bastard?

"I need to get my head straight. Don't come after me," John warned.

Dion remained there, completely devastated, while the door opened and closed with a small swishing sound.

*****

Author's note:

Phew, this chapter really took me a while to get it done. I know how much you guys want longer chapters, but I'm afraid I'm not doing that well in the attention span area. Anyways, three writer's blocks later and after fighting thoughts like 'Oh, no, I have no idea how I am going to pull this through', here it is. I hope you all enjoyed it. If you did, or if you didn't, please let me know. I just love reading your comments. It makes it all more worthy it.

Since some of you asked for more John and Dion, I hope this chapter fulfills your need for our newest couple. Topher, DreamToCome, odysseus_wanderer, and all the anons who cared about leaving comments, you guys make me cry of happiness. You guys, you da real MVP.

Chris, I am seriously thinking about editing and adding some bits to the final version of the story - for the time when I will publish it - based on your suggestions. For now, what it was written cannot be taken back, so I will have to fight with the draft when I will go over it. Until then, keep your comments coming. They really help me get better.

Love you all, until next time :)

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by ChrisJarone02/07/15

Contentment is not enough (never) … and the Wind of change doesn’t blow straight

Hi Laura, I’m glad it helped… it was just a little pinprick… you’re really great with words and creating suspense at the right time. I imagine well the situations you build! Go on like this, formore...

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by cannd02/07/15

Outstanding

Laura, you're doing an awesome job. This chapter was so good. i really enjoyed it. I know you say you struggled with getting it right, but I almost don't believe you :P Seriously though, I think youmore...

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by DreamToCome02/06/15

gets better and better...;)

I do enjoy reading your chapters,long or short, they all keep me wanting more, all your characters have something to keep wanting to know more about them,as you successfully described the life theymore...

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by Anonymous02/06/15

Excellent story

Wonderful story, good plot and characters. Team John+Dion! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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by Lysyana02/05/15

loved it!

As difficult as it was fir me to read this story at first the more I love it now. All your characters got an own story and an own way of dealing with life. Cant wait to read more!

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