A Good Servant Ch. 12

byLauraSFox©

So, I would love to hear from you. Tell me what you think, straight and with no sugarcoating. What do you think will happen now? What should Lucas do to exact revenge? He had to keep his cool in front of the Trainers, but he's seething on the inside. Why do you think was Cory branded? (That is a bit that will play an important part in the story, and I've already chosen the symbol).

Next time, we'll take a trip across the continent, to Lucas's home town. Cory's adventures are just beginning, I promise! And yes, Chris, he is still the hero ;) I could never forget about him. He will continue to be the red thread that keeps everyone connected, and the key to everything. I felt just like you about him, that he is more fearless, driven by love, but fate is not always kind, and as the song says 'there are storms we cannot weather'. And don't worry, the grey ones, as you say, will play an important part and their role will be revealed at the right time. At the moment, no one knows what they really are, and ... as they discover, so will you and I.

DreamToCome, I am so glad you continue to enjoy and I hope the guys will continue to help you have nice dreams ... ;)

Cannd, as always, your elaborate comments are making me so happy. It is like having a dear friend noticing every little thing I thought about while writing, and, as it is often said, the author writes thinking about her readers, but, at times, one in particular becomes the one the author thinks is addressing as putting together the story. For your continuous interest and support, I deeply thank you.

All you guys on team John and Dion, I hope this chapter was to your liking. Their story was a bit of a side one, but I did enjoy writing about them. There will be less of them in the upcoming chapters, but they will return at opportune times.

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