"You are, but it feels good to have my ass destroyed like this by you," Andreas moaned and threw his head back. "Dion, please," he begged and the redhead moved to position himself in front of Andreas.
John was beginning to know that he was going into a veritable sensory overload, as he saw Dion pushing his delicate cock through Andreas's rosy lips. He could not see much from where he stood, but the expression of pure bliss on the redhead's face was telling him Andreas was doing a pretty good job with himself.
"Thank you," he dragged Dion in for a kiss, over Andreas's arching back, as he released himself deep in the pliant body he was riding.
Dion kissed him back passionately. Making his lover happy was the one thing that could make him happy beyond his words, too.
*****
Author's Note: Well, guys, I think I must apologize first for the long delay, but RL gets in the way many times, so it took much longer than expected to get here.
As you can see, I made a somewhat risqué move with the threesome between Dion, Andreas and John. Where things will go from here, we will see, and I will base my decision on what you will say to me about it. Since it was your special request to keep Andreas in the story, and to go back to Dion and John more, now the responsibility rests on your shoulders ;)
Now, I have a series of comments to leave for all the people who reviewed the previous chapter.
gayTopher, hey, who wouldn't want their story turned into a movie? But I'm no George Martin, I'm afraid. One could fantasize, though ... oh, yeah, that would be so nice.
Cannd, as always, you are on my side, and I greatly appreciate it! Especially about Lucas not stooping on Antoine's level. As far as some of your questions about the Trainers' influence, they will be answered in due time, and I hope this chapter also throws some light on the matter. Since you are asking about the symbol branded on Cory's shoulder, I must admit that it is something I drew from history, and not from my imagination. The lily flower was a symbol burned into the shoulders of prostitutes back in medieval ages, but, intriguingly enough, it is also considered a symbol of royalty in France, with the three petals standing for what I wrote in the story "those who work, those who fight, and those who pray". Who will belong to which category we will see further down the road. Also, about what you asked about Lucas's and Cory's relationship being frowned upon, unlike the affection shared by Antoine and his master, what I can tell you is that the latter was not the same, since Antoine was encouraged to have sex with others and Arnaud's preference was seen as nothing but a temporary whim, easy to accept.
Lysana, I'm glad to receive greetings from Germany! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.
DreamToCome, I kind of counted on shocking everyone because the Trainers are the evil in the story, so they should do evil stuff. Where do I get ideas for names of the places? Practically, from everywhere; whether there is something I hear or see, or something I play, since I used to play a lot of video games.
Nanobot, it's great that you're still enjoying the story! I hope I will pull this through without disappointing too much!
For the Anon who particularly wanted to see more of Andreas, I have no idea if the current course of action is what you expected (probably not, he, he). As for the inspiration, well, desole, je suis pas Francais, but I did get some of my inspiration related to this subject from a book written by a French author. It's Portrait du Diable en Chapeau Melon, by Serge Brussolo, if you ever heard of the book.
Chris, I know I let you last, but I hope you don't mind too much. I am so excited somebody knew about the symbol! For me, it was an obscure memory at first, since I read The Three Musketeers by Alexandre Duman when I was in 4th grade or something like that. Milady is the one wearing the brand in the book, and the idea was to show her to the world as being a whore. I know I will have to work on Lucas's role on the following chapters, since he is the one remaining behind. Uh, that will be really tough! You are so right about examples made of glass. Perfection is never real. Small mistakes often gather to create a wave that has the potential to change everything. (wink, wink). And it's like you are reading my mind with your phrase "union is strength". Of course Ayn won't stay away; he's in my plans from the beginning, and what will happen will create an even stronger bond between him and Xav. And as far as he being a brat ... spot on! I must also say that I saw the pictures, and yes! That could be Ayn's home! I hope the 7 seconds were not too long ... I used to love that song when it was on MTV on heavy rotation in the 90s ...
Until next time, the author takes a bow and goes back to her corner to write some more. Thank you everyone!
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