"You are, but it feels good to have my ass destroyed like this by you," Andreas moaned and threw his head back. "Dion, please," he begged and the redhead moved to position himself in front of Andreas.
John was beginning to know that he was going into a veritable sensory overload, as he saw Dion pushing his delicate cock through Andreas's rosy lips. He could not see much from where he stood, but the expression of pure bliss on the redhead's face was telling him Andreas was doing a pretty good job with himself.
"Thank you," he dragged Dion in for a kiss, over Andreas's arching back, as he released himself deep in the pliant body he was riding.
Dion kissed him back passionately. Making his lover happy was the one thing that could make him happy beyond his words, too.
*****
Author's Note: Well, guys, I think I must apologize first for the long delay, but RL gets in the way many times, so it took much longer than expected to get here.
As you can see, I made a somewhat risqué move with the threesome between Dion, Andreas and John. Where things will go from here, we will see, and I will base my decision on what you will say to me about it. Since it was your special request to keep Andreas in the story, and to go back to Dion and John more, now the responsibility rests on your shoulders ;)
Now, I have a series of comments to leave for all the people who reviewed the previous chapter.
gayTopher, hey, who wouldn't want their story turned into a movie? But I'm no George Martin, I'm afraid. One could fantasize, though ... oh, yeah, that would be so nice.
Cannd, as always, you are on my side, and I greatly appreciate it! Especially about Lucas not stooping on Antoine's level. As far as some of your questions about the Trainers' influence, they will be answered in due time, and I hope this chapter also throws some light on the matter. Since you are asking about the symbol branded on Cory's shoulder, I must admit that it is something I drew from history, and not from my imagination. The lily flower was a symbol burned into the shoulders of prostitutes back in medieval ages, but, intriguingly enough, it is also considered a symbol of royalty in France, with the three petals standing for what I wrote in the story "those who work, those who fight, and those who pray". Who will belong to which category we will see further down the road. Also, about what you asked about Lucas's and Cory's relationship being frowned upon, unlike the affection shared by Antoine and his master, what I can tell you is that the latter was not the same, since Antoine was encouraged to have sex with others and Arnaud's preference was seen as nothing but a temporary whim, easy to accept.
Lysana, I'm glad to receive greetings from Germany! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.
DreamToCome, I kind of counted on shocking everyone because the Trainers are the evil in the story, so they should do evil stuff. Where do I get ideas for names of the places? Practically, from everywhere; whether there is something I hear or see, or something I play, since I used to play a lot of video games.
Nanobot, it's great that you're still enjoying the story! I hope I will pull this through without disappointing too much!
For the Anon who particularly wanted to see more of Andreas, I have no idea if the current course of action is what you expected (probably not, he, he). As for the inspiration, well, desole, je suis pas Francais, but I did get some of my inspiration related to this subject from a book written by a French author. It's Portrait du Diable en Chapeau Melon, by Serge Brussolo, if you ever heard of the book.
Chris, I know I let you last, but I hope you don't mind too much. I am so excited somebody knew about the symbol! For me, it was an obscure memory at first, since I read The Three Musketeers by Alexandre Duman when I was in 4th grade or something like that. Milady is the one wearing the brand in the book, and the idea was to show her to the world as being a whore. I know I will have to work on Lucas's role on the following chapters, since he is the one remaining behind. Uh, that will be really tough! You are so right about examples made of glass. Perfection is never real. Small mistakes often gather to create a wave that has the potential to change everything. (wink, wink). And it's like you are reading my mind with your phrase "union is strength". Of course Ayn won't stay away; he's in my plans from the beginning, and what will happen will create an even stronger bond between him and Xav. And as far as he being a brat ... spot on! I must also say that I saw the pictures, and yes! That could be Ayn's home! I hope the 7 seconds were not too long ... I used to love that song when it was on MTV on heavy rotation in the 90s ...
Until next time, the author takes a bow and goes back to her corner to write some more. Thank you everyone!
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well,you do keep me intrigued by your surprises in every chapter, to have me glued to the computer screen!..how do you come up with the new steamy ,intriguing ,chapters? I look forward to reading more, as I always do..threesome was ...making me have a very vivid images of them...! lol
When xav got his new clothes, I was chuckling with their ways of arousing each other.. Well, keep going ..more...
I WONDER WHY AND HOW THAT ANON COMMENTER
doesn't publish after writing a stand alone critique, Respectfully TK U MLJ LV NV
Opportunity makes the thief
Gods… what’s that floating woman there in the dark galleries… and than… those who are no longer acceptable (old) are destined to work in the mines… I think it was like escaping from hell for Cory … following the light out of the darkness… you’ve to die and than can start a new life … so she (the apparition) has her hand over her womb protecting what…a sign- a dream- for Cory and the world? I liked this little magic. There is a new line leading to his mark on the shoulder, isn't it? I’m curious… Cory was and still is a sensitive.
I can see Vacchiari having a dirty role again in the play with the trainers and Lucas.
Terrifying land this Aerea… think they’re much more near by a rebellion than Drena will ever be if they have to use machines to burn away strong feelings like sex and love. Everything big starts with a strong feeling… why are they still using this machine the trainers gave them… if they are so scientific and head leaded why don’t refuse it?
Xav and Ayn are in a good mood… the two of them changing because of the other. Want more of the exciting competition – prevailing one over the other and viceverso. I think they’re good having their little fights even if it looks as if Ayn is the boss.. it’s not so clear. But I think you‘ve to challenge them so they can achieve what they really mean for each other.
Oh, by the way…nice threesome I’m surprised – really ;.) liked it and I think Dion is doing great … where have you left the sweet little shy driven boy … is he coming out… are you joking, aren’t you? but yes he’s doing great and will not be destroyed… Jo still loves him … the other part is unsatisfied sex… “opportunity makes the thief”!
Let’s talk about Andreas… is he really in love or is he searching for changes he can’t realize by his own? He will be an uncertain Element… want to see sacrifying himself for Big John, but I don’t know …he left a dark feeling in me, too.
See forward the deserts fight … and good luck in the corner you’re writing in these fantastic things ;-)
Chrismore...
Gooe one..
Love it ... but was surprise at Andreas joining Dion n John. I was hoping you will find him another man. I was jealous for Dion... it however throws some light, that may be Dion is insecure that if Andreas comes back n oppologise John would Left him... hence the action of inviting him... but it Also Shows that John isn't really over Andreas n his unwillingness to talk seems to convince Dion about his insecurity... Rather than to loose John Dion was willing to Share... I hope John realise how previous n deeply inlove Dion is with him to go n do the thing he did, n choose Dion. Let that one tryst help him get over Andreas ... n ask him to move on n find another good man for himself. M really Scared for Dion now that And read is in John's life again... Threesome never work in a relationship some one will always feel left out or not love enough...In a fling yea threesome good but relationship I dont think so.
Love the budding growth of feelings of Ayn n Xav... though they deny it..
PPSS79. INDIAmore...
intriguing
As a rabid fan of science fiction I'm much enamored of the structure and pace of this story. You have neatly illustrated the problematic double standards of morals and principals in 'modern' society. These guides are meant to aid but are sadly more often used as a ruler to measure ourselves against others and a weapon in conformity and abuse. We will only know peace, I fear, when strictures of prejudice, guilt and control are dissolved. Utopias have room for one person only.more...
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