"Alright, Conner. I'm sorry. I apologize. Please, Conner. Please!"
She wasn't a stupid girl. I think she understood what had happened and I think she'd learned a lesson. I don't know if she accepted it, but she'd learned there was a difference between what happened sexually and what happened outside of sex. She'd learned that I liked to be manipulated within limits, but that I had limits.
I stood up. "You're lucky I like you," I said.
I went to her and straightened her tattered, muddy dress and helped her down the rainslick hill to where the van stood with its blinkers flashing. Inside there were blankets she could use as towels and to keep herself warm, and inside was a change of clothes that, with some instinctive prescience, she'd brought along just in case. For all that had happened, it was still fairly early, and ahead of us everything I'd prepared at my place still was waiting.
I helped her in, climbed into the driver's seat and we took off.
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Fantasy.
Kidnapping is a common fantasy. It is probably more fun to imagine than to actually experience. Reality seemed to come and go. What does he have planned at his place?
CREDIT WHERE CREDIT IS DUE!!
I applaud the upgrade in the technical aspects of your writing. You have become a much more profesional writer as befits your obvious storytelling skills.By all means, perservere. It will only benefit you in the long run.more...
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