Stacy tells me you are a hero even though you deny it. I am not surprised on either count. You saved lives at great risk to your own life and I know you would do it again and again and again, because that's who you are. So now I'm asking you, begging you Bob, save my life. Let me come and see you, nothing more. Just let me sit quietly in your room and be close to you for an hour or two. We don't have to talk as I suspect you have nothing to say to me, but please Bob, one last time, let me see you. Let me have this last memory to take with me forever.
I know it means nothing to you, but I have never stopped loving you and never will.
Kathy
Kathy,
You can come.
Bob
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Why do they allow " Anonymous" comments?
I am sure it it mostly a method for cowards to safely voice their opinion without the ability for reprisal. Of course there is no method to prove it but I would bet that over 95% of Anonymous posters have not only never served in the Military but more that that have never experienced combat.If so the entire tone of their posts would be different. One last thing, why do you feel the need to bash the author's for something as mundane as the way they punctuate their stories for God's sake. Remember this, they write these stories for your enjoyment and if you feel you could do better then leap right in and let it fly.
To my fellow Marine Brothers I just say "Semper Fi". To my other brothers in arms I just say "Thank you for your service.
To "callmesparky" just say, Keep on keeping on ...more...
illiterate righting
1 star wurth less crapola, blah, blah meaning nothing same as the crap tello.
1 star
Well,anon below, when someone is an illiterate idiot like you without ability to perceive what they attempt to read ...
..well, its time you go back to your school and demand money back. They obviously couldn't do anything with a low IQ trash like you. But I digress.
The story is excellently written with a great deal of promise for the future.
Good luck, and thank you for a wonderful story.more...
Shitty writing
First, you have no clue how to punctuate. Makes reading the story difficult.
Second, you flop back and forth between the husband's story and the wife's, with no demarcation. Very difficult.
Third, the predictable nature of the arc makes reading this dreck unnecessary.more...
RACC PLOT ALERT!!!!ALERT!!!!! written by a woman!!!ALERT!!
Well why does this blow snot bubbles and die as a story.
1 daughter phones mom which she hated? to tell about dad? while she was living with the other guy?
This is written by a woman only thing i can think of, it is so hard to follow and poorly written. Or a pro-cuckold like MM(which is a woman)
MEN stop listening to your females about plots, it is like listening to a cat talk about feelings(that makes no sense..my point is made)more...
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