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Too cuck oriented
I felt this story belonged in another category perhaps, fetish. It seemed like a hotwife/cuckold arrangement throughout. For that reason and others I felt it warranted 1* If the author would've developed a protagonist with more gumption it could've evolved to a more readable story. The title is not suitable for this story.more...
realy enjoy your stories
no forced reconciliation and there's pretty good shock value involved
Conseqeunces NOT the same thing as BTB
ya know...suggesting that the wife actually pay a penalty of some kind or some sort of consequences for her recent actions which destroyed Bob... her family and the marriage ....is not the same thing as BTB burn the bitchmore...
Why have her grinding his humiliation into his face, while lying in a hospital bed?
She tells him, "I even guided him as he entered me the first time and enjoyed it when he filled me over and over again." This sounded like a line from a cuck story, where the wife is intentionally humiliating the wimp husband. This is not what a contrite regretful wife would tell a husband, hoping she just might reconcile with him. You go on to have her tell him, again, every possible humiliating aspect of her sex with the mayor. Why? Do you have some subliminal cuck tendencies, or just want to add that type of appeal to the cuck readers? Totally turned me off your story, and off you as an author. It was pointless to the story, unless one of the points was the cuckolding tension and anguish. Only another cuck enjoys reading that. Ruined the whole story. Hope it works for your other readers. Thanks for trying.more...
He did state he would get every one 100 miles around that served
Some of you are going off about the marines saying but I'm pretty sure he mentioned he would get everyone who served in a 100 mile radius ....
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