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The pack didn't let up when these three came three more took their place this went on for what seemed like forever until every one had shot his load at least once.
Finally once they had all finished they wiped me down, carried me in tears, limp and trembling like a rag doll, back to my master in shame and exhaustion. I was too weak to stand so I found myself laid across his lap, him stroking my forehead, cradling and soothing me.
"Once again my little kitten, " he said calmly and softly, running a smooth hand over my face and wiping away my tears, "you will learn to obey me. You belong to me now and you will be my most prized possession. You can now forget the world from which you have come."
- COMMENTS
sweet_kittenalmost 2 years agoAuthorTotally agree with you there Anonymous .. this was written back in 2005 and has never undergone serious editing. One of the reasons I have never created a sequel is that I would like to rewrite it with more focus on the character dynamics and the psychological manipulation of the 'Master' ... I think in many ways I got lost in the smut aspect when really the key excitement for me lay in the hunt itself and the desire of the 'Master' and his wolves .. I liked the layering of the different characters in the story ... some cruel and nasty ... some maybe empathic and the Master's mystery and Dominance. I still think back to this story all these years after it was written :)
Anonymousalmost 2 years agosweet_kitten:
Well written, though I feel you could have put some more time into differentiating the experiences in the finale. If they'd been described as well as the early parts of the narrative, I think I'd have given you the last star. Still, very hot set up, and a nice opening act. I hope to see more.
Iamcurious: Really? A hot story is not social commentary. Women need the same rights and freedoms as men. Including the right to declare themselves submissive without it becoming a statement about their entire gender. There are submissive men as well. We don't say that means that men don't need liberation, or that it means something about all men everywhere.
Iamcurious999almost 4 years agoA sound insight into the fact that women don't handle freedom well.
Women need love, not "liberation". I'm sure we will see a happy kitten in coming stories.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI love how you have planned and written this story. The characters’ personalities are all very fitting of their role. I hope you could continue this piece please. I really can’t wait for more.
