A Knock on the Door

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My thoughts were interrupted with a knock coming from the door...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OOKAAAY

All the "niggas'" ruined it 4 me

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This is GAY

I have no desire to read gay stories, post it in the proper place and I won't 1 bomb you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
All the "nigga" talk ruined this.

Dialogue or not, it wasn't necessary. All of the cussing & "bruh", really detracted from the story. It was good otherwise, but that was a serious turn off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Some warning about this being a gay romance would have been nice, I'm not into that, but I kept reading til I got the the first 'Nigga', I find that offensive whether or not you intended to be offensive with Devin being called that.

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