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“Are you getting turned on by this, slut? Does the idea of your daughter cumming because you are eating her pussy excite you?” All I could do was whimper yes and nod my head. He took Lindsey’s hands away from my head and by the hair, pulled me back on my knees. “That’s one of your so called taboos I’ve shattered. I’ll think about the next one and get back with you later on it.” He untied me, turned to Lindsey and helped her up from the chair, and then got dressed. As soon as he finished, he gave my daughter a kiss on the cheek, and a quick hug. He turned to me. I couldn’t even look at him in the eyes. He raised my chin, kissed me hard on the mouth, then, with a twinkle in his eye, winks at me. One last caress on my chin, he walks out the door leaving my daughter and me.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoWOODEN, STILTED LANGUAGE, NO REAL FLOW, BLAND, AWKWARD, AND CLUMSY!!!! OFF-PUTTING!!!! UNCOMFORTABLE, FORCED, RELUCTANT STYLE!!!! THIS AUTHOR WRITES AS IF IT IS A CHORE AND HE/SHE IS LOATHE TO PUT MORE THAN MINIMAL EFFORT INTO CREATING A SOPHISTICATED AND REWARDING EXPERIENCE FOR THE READER!!!! IF HE/SHE WERE INDEED A SLAVE THIS TYPE OF APATHETIC APPROACH WOULD SURELY LEAD TO MUCH PAIN AND PUNISHMENT!!!!
opened minded (open-minded)
her and I (she)
I (-was the) (had) butterflies in (my) stomach
I (-spied upon) Master’s (noticed) (my)
jaw line (jawline)
piped (up) that
ordered (-for) only
not you mother (your)
I want her too (to)
and setting the bucket (set)
I witness (witnessed)
He sat Master’s (set) (2)
reminded (him)
had me daughter (my)
involved with each (other)
he took (He)
all that (All)
proceeds to spank (proceeded)
counted a full dozen . . . fed thirteen of them . . . last two (13 + 2 = 15 NOT 12!!!!INNUMERATE!!!!)
When I reached the (-correct) door, I realized that the moaning was coming from behind (-the door) (it)
I am (a) slave
lowers his head (lowered)
(-this was not to be looked forwarded) (he did not look forward) to (this) either
thru my brain (through)
exited (-out) the room
eye opener (eye-opener )
open minded (open-minded)
it was me (I)
rear view (rear view)
groping my kid (-about)
tho (though) (3)
hand cuffs (handcuffs)
It will drive her wild (-with it)
it (-soon) take me very long (didn’t)
naked as me (I was)
slowly slid (slide)
STOPPING till she asked him to STOP (7 WORDS)
turn to me (turned)
i (I)
her’s (hers)
(-the) her slit
Anonymousover 19 years agoMy Master found this story for me and I can't wait to read the next chapters - It's almost like the author has been living in my head! Keep writing --- Please!
Anonymousover 20 years agoman, i couldn't believe what a hot story that was! keep up the great work. make it a series. i want to read more about this!!!!!
Anonymousover 20 years agoI think that you should let go and not just use story text. I would almost bet that it runs in the family and Daughter would like it as much as you would. Keep the stories cummin!
