A Moment of Time Ch. 01

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Two lovers spending forbidden time together.
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MissDXX
MissDXX
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How about that. I get to spend several endless passionate nights and wake up next to my love. He is everything and more. He holds the key to my heart and knows me inside out. How easy it is just being with him, I cannot help but think how lucky I am to have him as a part of my life. When this convention came up, it was a dream come true. Some time alone with him. I didn't care when or where it was, as long I have my time with him. Yes, I can picture it all now.

The ride to the airport was slow but I never noticed. Sitting in the car with you discussing anything and everything was a wonderful diversion. We made it with lots of time to spare. Washington, D.C here we come! I was excited about the plane trip and sitting with you. It was wonderful just being able to sit beside you and to just talk some more. No one ever guessed the true nature of this time together. Not soul even guessed that our relationship was more than platonic. Keeping the secret was my treasure. As not a soul needed to know anything and quite frankly, it wasn't their business to know. Yes, it was obvious we were close but only us knew the truth. At one point, I was reading and fell asleep on your shoulder. I remember waking up to feeling something soft against my cheek. It was your jacket. You felt me move and looked down with a smile on your face. "You're finally awake" you half giggle to me but it was obvious that you liked as I slept on your shoulder. It took a minute to realize where I was and the fact that we were almost there.

A car was waiting for us to take us to the hotel we were staying at. It was a short car ride so I had a small opportunity to see the sites. Washington didn't seem a whole lot different than from the last time I was here ten years ago. But the site of glistening green trees against a deep blue sky was still just as stunning. This time, I was here with you to share the moment.

Here we are at this convention far from home. The hotel gave us separate rooms but I slipped you a key to mine. Over the course of the day, we go about our business separate from each other. Approaching the dinner hour is time to converse with others and have a little fun with other people attending. We laugh, joke and kid around for hours until I feel tired. I decide I want to retire for the night. Yet before I go, I make sure to inform you. You say nothing and go about your business.

I return to my room pondering if you'll follow. I go inside and start to get ready to retire for bed. It isn't long until I am all done and slip between the bed sheets wearing only a thong. I doze off and stir when the bedsheets move in the darkness sometime later. I knew it was you. I instantly felt your hand on my waist as you come lay beside me. I feel as you move it slowly up and down my side. I snuggle closer to you to fit within the contours of your body. I place my leg on top of yours as you shift around slightly.

I feel your hands touching my skin as you lean in towards me to kiss me. I place my one hand on your side and touch your skin that was within my reach. I wrap the other around your arm closer to me.

I can barely see you in the dark but I can feel everything. The sensation from your touch as you move to touch my thighs, my breasts and play with the nipples. I reach down and massage your penis and feel it respond to my touch.

As the intensity quickly grows, I feel your lips move down to my neck and as you bury your head between my head and shoulders, I feel you move your hips closer to mine. I move my hand away as I no longer had access and as I do, I feel your hand move my thong to the side. Before I knew it, you were inside me. I gasp from the pleasure from the moment and from entering with such ease. It wasn't long until you. Become tense and I feel you come inside me. We lay together in that position until you pull out. The next thing, sleep overtakes us but I wake up sometime in the night. It was still dark. You were asleep. I look at you peacefully sleeping and think about what we had just done. I decide that I want you again. So I go down on you. You wake up soon enough and come in my mouth. Then fall back asleep rather quickly.

I wake up to light in the room with the sound of running water from a shower coming from the bathroom. I decide to come visit you there. It wasn't long until I go down on you again. I feel you tense up quickly as I play with your scrotum and have you in my mouth. Then you climax and once you relax your body, I stand up and whisper in your ear "till we meet again tonight my love". I lean in to hug you then leave to get ready for the day.

MissDXX
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MissDXXMissDXXalmost 9 years agoAuthor

I wanted to thank all of you for sharing your criticisms. There were some that were well thought out but we're not directed to me but left here Instead. I wish that they would have contacted me directly so I could have done an exchange with them. I don't know who they are as most comments were posted under anonymous.

I hate to say but you were right and the comments have been noted. When I have a chance, I will do a re-write. I have your comments and gone back to change some of my other stories. I am hopeful that in the future that perhaps contacting the author directly and sending a private message would be more appropriate means of offering criticisms because the author may want to ask you for more constructive insight from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
many fantasies are snippets

One very good writer on this website has posted what she calls 'fantasies'. Nothing more nothing less.

She began one of these episodes with a 4-5 sentence ramble about who the players were, how they got together, then wrote something like "but who cares about the details .. in my fantasy, it just starts".

Fair enough. She wasn't writing a story and neither were you. It's a snippet of a fantasy. Judged as a story .. well, obviously not. Judging the writing for what it is, then the writing is OK, better than average for people who post snippet fantasies.

The problem is that while we may not think the details, they are nonetheless there in the backgrouind of our thoughts. That's what gives a fantasy the personal power it has.

Writing a story to fill out those unexpressed details can be an exercise in self-discovery.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not a story, but a scene. Not characters, but actors...in a scene......

....Not a meaningful event, just sex acts. No context, no back story, no depth.

So, why bother? More importantly, why not take the next step and offer some broader meaning....by crouching this scene in a story, where we get to know the characters and relate to them. Where we can respond emotionally and intellectually to the things they do, the conflicts they face or creat and resolve or not.....and the things they don't do.

You had a snapshot in your head and wanted to share? OK, erotic it was, even somewhat sexy. But we can't care about players that we don't relate to. Ya, dangling participle....sue me.

We can't love or hate an empty space....the space you don't fill when you write a vignette, a scene, instead of a story.

I hope this does not sound too harsh as you read it. But I DO hope you understand our disappointment in what feels like the rub of a dry sponge on our psyche.

It is rough and feels incomplete, and so abrades our sensibilities.

luedonluedonalmost 9 years ago
impo_61 described it perfectly

I also scored it 2

impo_61impo_61almost 9 years ago
The writer....

The writer felt the need to write something and wrote it...About two faceless, incognito persons, that can be young, middle age or old, married, divorced or single, that go together to an unknown place...Too many unknown factors...2*

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