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Click hereHe said: "If that the way it has to be Angie, then that's the way it is. I want to see you again to and I'll do anything to have that happened. But please call me!"
She kissed him and told him she would call him before the end of the week. She started her car and drove away. She said to herself: "Oh yea! I'll call you Bud you don't have to worry about that baby. You are now the man I want to keep me satisfied. Oh yea! I'll call you." She smiled as she started thinking: "Mom as right! Just like she always is." There were still 33 days before Frank her husband would be coming home.
Too many obvious errors in grammar and spelling!
I assume you read your material carefully before publishing. If you don't, ignore the rest of this.
Some people's brains have difficulty processing the visual, printed word. If you have this characteristic, get someone who is a natural to edit for you (I do this for my wife, who is smarter than I, but doesn't have my spelling/grammar gift)!
Keep writing!