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Click hereI turned Lauryn on my lap so she was no longer facing me. I pulled her into my arms and she snuggled into my side on that big comfy chair on the balcony. She once again placed her face into my neck as I grabbed my glass of wine. I peered over the balcony and I looked out in the large wooded area behind my home. It was such a peaceful moment that I felt I could live it for the rest of my life and that's exactly what I intended on doing. At that moment I knew what I had to do.
"Marry me." I whispered to her...
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoAfter finishing up the tragic and heartbreaking story 'Valerie' in my back catalog this one was a fantastic respite. Thank you for that.
Anonymous3 months agoFrankie is a unique character: an author fantasy Mary Sue who is nevertheless entirely unpleasant, without redeeming qualities. Shallow, jumps to conclusions CONSTANTLY--her only personality traits are being rich, not listening to people she claims to care about, and liking it when bimbo with even less personality fawns all over her. Selfish and controlling.
At least Lauren is rich, too, or the power dynamics would be even more abusive.
AlyssaTennya11 months agoDid not care for main character, too selfish. Too rich. Am a fan of rich vs poor relationship dynamics or rich vs middle class but rich vs ungodly rich just leaves me pissed off at the more obnoxious one.
UncertainTabout 1 year agoI loved reading this again. Have you just reposted this as I am sure that I voted 5* last time and there must have been earlier comments?
