The man explained what had happened that day to his mechanic, and gave him a copy of the pics, to make up for the false alarm.
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For pedants and typing errors
The second game played in the story, was indeed "the man's version" and bared no reference to the first game. It was adapted by him, to be a more difficult game with ANY question allowed to be asked, thus increasing the chances of a person undressing!
For the record:- I'm familiar with how the game is normally played! I trust that satisfies the pedants out there?
I also made a typo with the title, as I almost lost the will to post it, having to re-edit it for the fourth time, and I temporarily lost focus.
My heart sunk when I saw what I'd done! I'm annoyed at myself for that.
Hopefully, you just read it as a fictional stripping story? That was all it was ever supposed to be! Nothing more!more...
Ojd people rule
Just like the old saying that old age and trickery will over come youth and foolishness every time.
I enjoyed that ...
... but a typo in your title?! That takes a bit of wriggling out of - and has cost you a star! Do proof-read carefully before your submit anything! A nice story, all the same - thank you.
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