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This whore had much to answer for, very much indeed.
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And that wraps up Chapter 18! Again, thank you for reading, and for those of you that are following the story, I hope you're enjoying it. - Anti.
- COMMENTS
A_Stoneover 3 years agoI love how well you move through each characters perspectives, not too long or short. I also like how you’ve brought back sex scenes without sacrificing plot.
You have truly grown as a writer! I found this story and have binge read it so to see how much better each chapter is keeps me addicted!
I love a good David versus Goliath story, but I hope Aron gets some more help soon! Between Maloth and the Herolds, aron has a lot stacking against him!
I also second anons comment about how well you’re developing your bad guys :)
Anonymousover 3 years agoI just read through the whole story, and your writing and development of plot has gotten stronger and stronger as the story progressed. (Just noticed that the story started five years ago!!! Maybe that explains it - but the recent chapters are so much better than the 2012 beginning!) I am completely enjoying this, and hope that others find their way to your tale. The first couple of chapters don't do justice to the rest of the story - they are fine, but not nearly so interesting as what comes later! I appreciate how well you have developed the "villains" of the story, giving them motivations, backstory, perspective - though the sister is a bit underdrawn compared to her brother (in terms of time spent with her perspective). Or perhaps that just means that I would like to know more about her :) Thank you for all of your work on this, and I look forward to seeing where the story goes!
