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Redoing the Story
I have submitted a "remastering" of this story. I fixed all the errors, added some detail and added a better ending. This old version will remain as is as an example of what happens when you don't edit a storymore...
Wow....
Really liked this story....but you need to finish
this properly....great start...thank you
Next.....
It was very good as long as you tell the remainder of the story.
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