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Suddenly a hulking body stopped her. She slammed into it like hitting a wall. She struggled against the huge hands that held her arms keeping her from falling. “LET GO OF ME!” she screamed as she struggled. ‘Bella mia” he said. Castalena flipped her head up and there to her joy he stood. It was Duncan! Her Duncan!
- COMMENTS
Olurayme67about 9 years agoYou did a great job.
The only negative, is the painfully incorrect use of Scottish words and grammar.
Read you some guid poems or songs by oor well known Scots bard Rabbie Burns.
It canny help but improve your wonderful wordings.
miss_dreaabout 12 years agoLove the writing so far, but I found it very confusing to have the second series listed first, and the original series listed second (in the chapter sequencing.). it would be much clearer -- and easier to read -- if the Book 2 chapters were moved to the end, behind Book 1.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoAh, maybe using paragraphs would really help this story be more readable... great content I think, but I can't be bothered finishing it because i can't take a breath!
Anonymousover 18 years agoGood job, this story is very captivating to me. You should continue Book 1, if it isn't finshed.
