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As they sat and listened for a few more minutes Paul looked at her again. She was looking out into the distance, her blue eyes dancing in the light. He took a deep breath. She looked over at him. "What?"
"Nothing," he replied quickly. In reality, the feeling of her presence had washed over him in a way that he hadn't felt in a long time. It had been so long that he had almost forgotten what is was like to be so close to a beautiful woman, just sitting and listening to music. The feeling was both unsettling and exhilarating at the same time.
He gave his head a shake. "Lets do a walk around of the full rig," he continued quickly, realizing that a message had been conveyed. She smiled at him knowingly.
Paul got out and walked around to her side as she opened the door. He told her where to hold onto and what steps to use to safely dismount the cab. His intention was to let her step down but he stood there with arms out to spot her if necessary. Jane stood on the last step and was about to reach a foot to the ground when she hesitated and then purposely fell into his arms. He instinctively grabbed her around the waist and held her from falling. Jane wrapped her arms around his neck and held on.
The brat was back.
Looking into his eyes she smiled, still holding on despite his attempts to set her on the ground. "Sorry, I stumbled. Thanks for catching me." Slowly releasing her arms, without taking her eyes off his, she stepped back. Her smile deepened as she noticed his cheeks colouring and his eyes shift uncomfortably. She wanted a reaction and she silently enjoyed his awkwardness. This was going to be fun!
Paul was off balance but pulled himself together and completed the walk around. He gave her the information package and called it a day. He wanted to be away from her and wasn't entirely sure why. Back at his desk in the dispatch office he sat looking out the window.
Since Gillian had died Paul had not been with another woman intimately. Friends had set him up with dates after a half year had passed and he was grateful for their concern. However, he felt no response around women. He had talked with his sister Emily about how he felt or rather didn't feel. She knew he was still hurting badly and gently told him to be patient and let his feelings come when they would. He had once kissed a date good night and held her closely. She was a truly gorgeous redhead with a great sense of humour but he felt no response to the kiss. He was too embarassed by his non-reaction to a beautiful woman to ask her out again. After a year and a half his friends stopped trying to set him up.
But with Jane in his arms he had felt something and he couldn't shake the feeling. Finally he threw his head back and laughed out loud. Figures that maybe he had felt something for the only woman in his universe that he absolutely couldn't touch. Despite the fact there was nothing funny about the image of his balls being nailed to his boss's wall, he had to laugh at the irony.
He got up and headed out to pick up his girls at after school care, shaking off the feeling. If Jane was his summer project then he would get it done. He could do it, smart ass spoiled brat or not.
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Ravey19almost 2 years agoI'm going with it. Don't know all the techie stuff and I suppose an author here as elsewhere should know it but this is a free site and there's a degree of latitude we can give as it's difficult to dream up new scenarios for any story here.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI’m speechless about some of the feedback trying to critique the specifics to the story. All I can say is that I really like the storyline so far. I don’t know why so many people feel the need to criticize and be judgy but I guess everyone wants to be self important. Technicalities like which licensing and what you think or “know” the process should look like doesn’t matter here. That research should be saved for authors who make tons of money putting out their stories. They have the time and resources to devote to that. Plus, I don’t see you writing a story that is so captivating you can’t stop reading until you get to the end. And this is just chapter 1. I find myself easily putting a story down and picking back up later on most occasions but it turns out this story had me waiting for the next word. And yes, there were typos but can anyone say they’ve ever read a book/story that didn’t have at least one? The premise to the story is not lost so don’t pretend it’s a dealbreaker or an end all. I am ready to read more! 5 stars from me. Your story telling is fantastic, in my opinion. And while I spoke to the opinions of others, they are entitled to their opinion, just as I am entitled to mine. Thx.
Anonymousover 3 years agoIn serious need of editing to find the many, many typos and spelling errors.
rightbankover 6 years agoHe is between a warm and a soft place.
