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After ten minutes, Draco turned to Shiro and asked, "Hey, do you want to keep that or just have your pussy?"
She thought about it and said, "Even if I didn't want it, you don't have enough energy anymore to do it. And I do want it, but next time you're playing bitch."
Laura turned to Draco and kissed his shoulder while asking, "Can I have one too? I want to know what it feels like, and why guys are horny all the time."
Draco turned to Laura and said, "That will be for another time... for now we... have got... to go... to..." and he fell into a deep and peaceful sleep.
Laura and Shiro looked at each other and said, "Another time?"
- COMMENTS
JosephGibbsover 11 years agoAuthorI apologize for the name mishap. I had not noticed it while i was editing it and didnt catch it until someone told me about it. T_T i will try to correct this and make sure that it doesnt happen in the sequel. ^_^ thank you all for your feedback
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe beginning was very confusing. First, Shiro is waiting for Laura, and then, all of a sudden Laura is there having a conversation with Draco. And THEN, all of a sudden a man that was sent by LAURA shows up to pick up Shiro. Isn't Laura already there? CONFUSING INDEED!
Anonymousover 11 years agoA twist for sure,and somewhat confusing at the start as i think you got the names mixed up,,,need an editor for sure,,,a good first try,,,practice makes perfect,good luck
Anonymousover 11 years agoFairly good story but you got your pepole mix up there a time or two get a editer to look at your work keep up the story
