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Jamie drove down the long spiral toward the ground, and he asked, "So, was that good? The acting, I mean?"
"It was wonderful. I had no idea it was you until you were almost to the car, and I really liked your Lance."
"I loved your Kitty, too." He chuckled and added, "Both ways."
"Thank you for remembering my fantasies. The way you took me was just..." She let out a sensual growl, unable to find any words. "I didn't even think about doing it in public. I can't believe we did it, but oh my god. Then you top it off by indulging my pilot fetish, too."
She moaned after flicking a glance at him. "Where'd you get the uniform?"
"It is Halloween," he replied with mock condescension. "I had to go to three or four places to find it, actually."
"Well, remember where you got it, because we might just need it again," Jamie suggested as she pulled out onto the road. Now off the twisting ramp, she turned to him and licked her lips while twitching her eyebrows.
Jeremy waited until his wife paid for the parking at the gate, and then asked, "So, am I forgiven?"
"I suppose. Someone told me that I should give you a dressing down for not keeping up the maintenance on the car, though."
He laughed. "There's still some good wine left from the party. A few people are staying in town for another night, so we could have a mini-party tomorrow."
"I'd like that." She reached over and traced a finger up his thigh. "What do we do with the rest of tonight, though?"
"Well, I did sort of pick up something else while I was hunting for this at the costume shops."
"Let me guess — Princess Leia?"
He actually blushed when he nodded his head.
Jamie put her foot down on the accelerator, more than ready to skyrocket into another galaxy of bliss as his scantily-clad slave Princess. Never in her wildest dreams had she expected a Halloween treat this sweet.
She moaned at the thought and said, "I think the Force is with you."
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Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Hey, it fits the description of the category to the letter. I thought readers might enjoy the change of pace, and the comments should be fun.
Won't you leave me a vote and maybe drop me a line? After all, it only takes a few moments of your time.
- COMMENTS
AlexFourways4 months agoAnother great story. Slowly working through your back catalouge...
I had expected to find some Karen or Kevin whining on about unprotected stranger sex (what do they expect on literotica? like someone complaing about racing cars at Las Vagas or Monico breaking the speed limit!) but the handbrake turn at the end would have stumped them! Alex
Stacnash8 months agoI’m happy to admit that you got me with the twist at the end.
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It just means that a lot of my notes are completely redundant, so there’s not too much left for me to say here. Before the twist, you did a great job in getting me to dislike Jeremy due to his childish reaction to his wife missing the Halloween party. So, when “Lance” showed up on the scene, I was rooting for them both to get together. You made the prospect of Jamie being unfaithful seem credible, which is really important to me.
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Obviously, this was a short story and you didn’t need as many words as you used to tell it. The opening wasn’t the best, with her collecting luggage at the airport and too much time devoted to her moving around there. But it gained momentum after that and you ended up doing a great job.
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Before the twist, Lance was my favourite character as I loved his confidence. You didn’t need to make her consent so obvious as the reader knew she wanted it, but authors should always be commended for the sentiment of at least wanting to make it clear.
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One thing here was really interesting to me. I actually didn’t want Jamie and Jeremy to reconcile. Perhaps reconcile is too strong a word as they only had a difference of opinion about her work trip, but the principle is clear. What kind of male partner reacts like that to an important work commitment? All in the name of attending a Halloween party? Withholding sex and intimacy? So, it was with that in mind when I read how Lance erupted inside “Kitty” and I was thrilled by the act. In my mind, before the twist, I thought Jeremy deserved every bit of it. But you told the story you wanted to tell and you got me to bite to the point where I was surprised at the ending.
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What doesn’t really matter is the story that I wanted you to tell. Instead, you got me invested because you’re a really good writer and you managed to control my reactions throughout. But, from a selfish point of view, I think if Lance was real and Jamie had fallen for his charms, this would be the kind of story that I’d remember for a long, long time. I really do find this interesting because the ending you chose has obvious merit too. Maybe, just maybe, there was an opening here to be a little braver and close the show with genuine infidelity that would’ve been provocative, but would’ve made this hotter.
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In any event, you achieved something that every writer on this website truly craves. You’ve left your mark on the readers and I’ll be thinking about Jamie and Lance for a long time to come. When I score this, I don’t take points away because I didn’t get the ending that I really wanted. No author should be punished for that. Instead, you’ve earned points because your storytelling abilities are first-rate and you got me to root for Lance being real in a way that I don’t often do.
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Well done again. I haven’t read the other comments on this, so I’m going to post this review just now and hurry across to read them as I’m dying to see what everyone else thought. Once again, that’s a sign that your work really got to me.
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83/100. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
KittyLover80over 1 year agoAWESOME STORY. Terrific story and an exciting read. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this amazing story and plot.
Just_Gymover 1 year agoLoved it! I wasn't expecting your twist which is why the surprise was so good.
