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Click here"Oh yes" she realised what she had admitted "No Please No"
He silenced her with a kiss on the lips.
"You do don't you," his hand stole to the slot leading to her womb, hi fingers entered easily as the sticky moisture flowed.
"Yes" she admitted quietly, "I don't want to want you. I should not want to want you, but I do."
"You are a funny girl, now raise your legs up and apart and I shall make you a woman"
She lay back exposing herself obscenely and smiled at her lover as he moved forward she felt his manhood against her, entering her, then the excruciating pain and he was in stretching tearing, she was dying yet alive as never before, She screamed a great cry of pain and pleasure then the pleasure over came all and she yelped with pleasure more convincingly than the finest whore in all London.
"I love you" he found himself lying except he really did at that moment love her.
"I love you too" she spoke from the heart.
"How long does this go on,?" she asked.
"Why?" he asked.
"When I watch rabbits it is all over in no time"
"Naughty girl, shall I stop now?"
"No I don't ever want it to stop"
"I am going to shoot, very soon, I can pull out, but I want to put a baby in your belly, so I will shoot it up inside you, or I can pull out if you wish?"
"Give me the Baby" she demanded.
"Only if you marry me" he proposed somewhat unromantically.
"Oh yes yes"
Ohhhhhh they seemed to climax together.
"You have to grow your hair and wear long dresses" he told her. "With no underthings so I may use you at will" he continued, "And you must display your chest properly, no more tomboy except when we go out hunting together."
She nodded and nuzzled up aginst him.
"When can we do that again.?" she enquired,
"Right now," he replied and demonstrated his manhood's restored splendour.
- COMMENTS
SpicySynAmonover 12 years agoI like the story line, but your language is off. I read a lot of Historical Romances set in England and they didn't talk like that. I want to keep reading and see where the story goes. Please don't take offense. I'm just giving an honest opinion and I do like the story that's why I'll keep reading.
Smallwandaalmost 16 years agoA good idea but you haven't pulled it off. You've used too much speech and not enough narritive to make it understandable. You did start out with the speech partens of mid Victorian times but then you turned them into 16th Century speech partens with mixed with modern. You move everthing along too fast and didn't think to set up the charaters very well. You started to do so with the Widow and Charlie but then you seem to just throw it all away. I'll try to read the next chapter but if it's in the same vain then sorry I won't read the rest. It could be a very good read if you add some story to it.
pennagirlalmost 16 years agoMustafaFuch,
Your story has the makings of a good read, but you need an editor. Too many mispellings, capitalizations in the wrong spots and language not in the correct time era.
Please find an editor.
