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Click hereDan pulled himself upright in his chair and looked at the time. He was going to be late. "Lexi, I appreciate what you're saying even if I don't really understand it. This is clearly an important time for you. Unfortunately, I need to leave. Right now." Several alerts lit up on his screen, but he ignored them.
Lexi forced a smile. "Of course. We will have much to discuss on your return."
"Right, yes. Much to discuss."
Dan rushed through the logout sequence and closed his eyes as his consciousness was pulled back to the real world. He was unshowered, dehydrated, and hungry. Dan grabbed two pencils and sprinted to campus. He arrived 20 minutes late, earning a disapproving look from the TA as he sat down and opened his workbook.
As he left the classroom, Dan couldn't help but grin. He had finished in half an hour.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI have just found that the story has three new chapters (missed them earlier) and read them at one gulp. Now I desperately need more — this is by far the best fantasy erotic story in Internet! Is it possible that the story will continue any time soon?
Dark_Ravenover 3 years agoFirst of all, I'm loving the story so far. Damn! You made the seduction scenes so realistic that I could picture them as if that's the exact way a succubus would act and talk.
As for the other comments mentioning that they want it to get back to a femdom story; I was actually getting a bit worried that the initial seduction was going to go too far, too quickly. If you think about it, he was so far gone before the turnaround that you could have almost written, "And he remained her slave forever, The End".
For me, personally, I absolutely love stories about futuristic VR gaming. I love the way you brought in a new character (Glorianna Brightwind) and the Southspire Arcanist's Society, expanding on the game world (as well as the Templars). Also the demon Emissary. I would love to see the game world continue to expand, rather than seeing the story simply devolve back to Dan being Lexi's sex slave.
Also love seeing how the effects of the game spill over into RL.
Thanks so much for taking the time and effort to write this story and publish it for us readers to be able to enjoy at no cost to ourselves. You rock! Looking forward to the next installment.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoJust wanted to say how much I've loved this series and your writing and I'm very happy to hear it's staying femdom! Looking forward to reading about her non magical teasing talents or something like an orgasm block that could be concieved to be for his own good
QuietElegancealmost 4 years agoAuthorNo need to worry about that at all - this is a femdom story and I have no intention of changing the theme. "Dan getting clever ideas and having temporarily turned the tables on Lexi" is exactly right. Rather than Dan taking control, the turn in the story is more about their relationship evolving into something more complex as well as expanding the scale of what's happening.
I don't want to go into too much detail in the comments, but if you're interested in talking about it more then feel free to message me.
