A Voyage into Night Ch. 04

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From the house there came the mechanical sounds of shutters coming down, sealing in those occupants, both undead and still living, from the rising sun. In the ballroom,the floor was awash with the bodies of the drained. To their number had finally been added that of Katy. The jester had finally removed his mask to reveal a cadaverous, bone white face. Katie, exhausted but enraptured, had accepted his embrace gladly while, around them, a ring of onlookers had looked on. They had danced for almost the entire night. They had broke once, for Katy to accepted a goblet filled with dark red liquid. She had downed the warm drink in one great draught, sealing her fate. And later, as she felt the jester's teeth pierce her throat, she had finally got the joke, and she knew that tonight's dance would never end. She cried out in anguish as the watching audiences broke out in enthusiastic applause, welcoming a new sister to their ranks.

Outside, the eastern sky was beginning to turn to fire. Isobel was still conscious, although she knew it would not be for long. She was not frightened, she knew this was merely the beginning. The last sensation of Isobel's mortal life was of the ground falling away behind her, and, as her heartbeat faded into silence another sound took its place: the sound of great wings carrying her away from the coming dawn, and into the night.

The end.

(Writer's note: Well there it is. My first attempt at writing something a little more lengthy than my usual short efforts. I hope you liked it. Thank you for all of the feedback and votes I have received this far. All votes, comments, praise, criticisms and constructive abuse gladly accepted. Let's see if I can make the next one even better. CC.)

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coldcomfortcoldcomfortabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thankyou for all of the lovely comments. They mean a lot.

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meabout 2 years ago

I’ve read this story a few times, and it never gets old…

Wildheart107Wildheart107about 2 years ago

I enjoyed this a lot. Definitely one of the best short stories I've read. I know this was written a while ago, but I'd love to see more. There's potential for a good series here. With a bit of formatting and more material, I could see this becoming a proper ebook.

mrduuudemrduuudealmost 4 years ago
Bravo

very well done. I enjoyed it immensely!

I wish you would have done an epilogue so we could read about her adjustment to her new vampire life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story

A great story and well worth the 5-STARS I gave it. A well written story with an excellent plot and excellent character development. I agree with the previous comment that a sequel would be great showing Isobel and Katie adjusting to their new lives. It would be great to have it include them attending their 1st decentering. So please give it some thought about a sequel to this wonderful story.

Retired Army NCO

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