A Woman's Place Ch. 04

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MelloT
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Exhausted, Ellie tried to listen in on the voices coming from below but they were too faint to make out words or accents. She heard the front door close and then there was stillness. Had her new owner gone out too? Her eyes had been forced closed by the blindfold and sleep was battling its way through her aching limbs and throbbing injuries. Ellie succumbed gratefully and slipped into a dream world in which only she and Ben existed.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
As a piece of writing...

The entire story is very well written, it’s comprehensive with enough vivid details to evoke an emotional response from the readers because their either invested in the characters or the situation.

The down side of course is that it’s irrevocably non erotic. Maybe you could publish it for a wider audience in the Dark Romance category?

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Keep going keep going keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ROFL!

Wow, "Sexist Trash" commenter makes me laugh. ^.^

I think MelloT is being ambitious as well and handling a frightening topic with much more complexity, skill and effort than most stories on this site. "The Handmaid's Tale", anyone?

Keep going, MelloT. :) And yes, I'm a woman as well.

Corpse_riderCorpse_riderover 12 years ago
. . . barefoot and pregnant?

A good title, a good story.

Keep it up.

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 12 years ago
holy crap

I have enjoyed this whole story so far. Please don't stop now. And to the anonymous author of "Sexist Trash".... maybe someone could respond to you if you had the balls to back up your words. You sound like the typical loud mouth woman who thinks way more of herself than anyone around her does, even family. I think you are the perfect reason ball gags were invented.

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