"Ooh, well this could be an interesting position," Lexie said as she slid her hands up over the cheeks of Andrea's ass. "What should I do with you now?"
Andrea turned enough so she could look over her shoulder. "Make love to me, Lexie," she urged as she pressed her ass up against Lexie's hands.
"Oh baby, gladly," Lexie said as she laid across Andrea's back and kissed her once more.
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Good story but...
...unless you intend to write another chapter, you've rather left your readers hanging. So Lexie had a car-crash year and it's hinted that it was a public scandal and something to do with her manager. But what? I'm sure that most of your readers would like to know what it was that was sufficient to send Lexie into hiding and to think that Andrea might want nothing more to do with her. That criticism apart, it was a very well-written story and I've dished you out five stars on that account.more...
Nice, but...
I also would've loved to read about their pasts, and what happened to Lexie to bring her to that emotional state. I think a followup story into their background would be great.
I really enjoyed this story. The little hint of how well they sang together was brilliant. ^_^ I felt like both characters were distinct/unique. The writing itself flowed together well and the sex scene was great- well described and realistic. I look forward to reading more of your stories.more...
felt like i was missing something from both sides of the story.oh yeah the whole start of why they are both alone.
the romance
I like your story, It didnt sound like love at the first sight. It did break down barriers quickly and I like that. It sure started the year off right. Cant wait for the rest of the story.
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