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Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed my first submission. I have a few more chapters planned for this scenario... If people like it that is...
There is a second female love interest planned, just to make things a bit more dramatic.
A BIG Thankyou to the wonderful tjslilangel for editing.
Thanks again, all comments, and constructive criticisms appreciated.
- COMMENTS
evolvedboyover 17 years agoAuthorTo the person who commented anonymously about the overuse of '...'
I can see that there are a few paragraphs where I have used it unnecessarily, but mainly '...' is used to denote a pause in speech, as would be spoken by the characters.
I will try and cut down on its superfluous use for my next chapter, however there are instances which i feel it necessary.
Thankyou for your constructive criticism.
