Accidental Revelations Ch. 01

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"I'm a demi, I recently moved here I didn't know you had a full form animal daughter Cody," Sarah said to Cody as she dropped the towel, "That makes things so much easier," She said as she pressed on the necklace she wore.

Cody stared in shock and disbelief and he watched Sarah transform, Sarah's eyes had become snake like losing all human appearance her sides and back had grown scales while her legs lengthened and fuzed into a twenty one foot long tail which was a solid green with rust colored stripes running along it's length, "That's better, I love being with people in my true form what do you think Cody?" Sarah asked him but froze as she noticed his look of pure shock, "Umm you did know about us demi humans right?" she asked him, Cody shook his head then fainted.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
cringe

I was cringing while reading . beejezuz damn get an editor

LostlurkerLostlurkerover 3 years ago
Grammar

How can you have the ability to write an interesting story but not know your/you're and there/theyre/their ?

johsunjohsunabout 4 years ago

Arrrrgggghhhhh!!

Good story, the conversation/grammar a little stilted in places, but a good story. But it stopped. Needs to be finished. It's like 'Prehistoric Plains' by this author. Great Premise on both of them, but then ... nothing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
4th?

4th grade?

TbcodyTbcodyover 4 years agoAuthor
thanks for the comments

Thank you for spotting that as i would never have, any and all critics will help me improve as a writer and hopefully i can get better at editing as time goes on.

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