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Entertainment? What was that supposed to mean? Nadia started to pull her pants on when she felt lightheaded. Had Billie drugged her wine? Nadia didn't have time to ask what "entertainment" meant before she collapsed on the floor.
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Anonymousalmost 6 years agoLooking forward to the following chapter(s). Maybe add to the humiliation/control of Nadia by Billie. Then maybe a switch when Nadia gives Billie a hard dose of payback and gets to realize her original dream of controlling Billie - and maybe resolving her financial problems with her rival's money on a "play for pay" basis? Anyway, a nice start with lots of promise!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoPatiently waiting for part two. Although I agree with some of the previous comments; a woman who sees herself as a dominant partner would take a little more coaxing to submit. Conversely, if she was weighed down with guilt about her choice of lifestyle and sought some form of punishment then it would make more sense for her to become the submissive partner. I know the story is leading to her servicing a room full of women but I think that the sexual tension of Billie outing her secret would serve as strong a tool of control as her uncharacteristic submissiveness.
Anonymousover 9 years agoCouple of points -
1) most moslem girls are shaved (religion etc.)
2) where did Nadia grow up - having a girlfriend called Anna?
3) she seems to be drinking a lot and had too many boyfriends (one called Mark!) for a Pakistani immigrant girl
I totally get it that you dig Pakistani girls - god, they can be HOT! But not many are as westernised as you think.
