"Hear what?" asked Ellen.
"Sounds like the three of us weren't the only ones enjoying ourselves just now."
"What are you talking about?" Ellen asked.
"Neither of you heard that?"
It wasn't so surprising really. Courtney had been straddling Chad's face with her thighs as he tongued her to orgasm and she'd been making out with Ellen who was facing her as she impaled herself over and over on Chad's porn star shaft, quaking with the sheer thrill of it. She looked like she couldn't believe this was happening, and couldn't believe how much she loved that it was happening, and not just because she'd never felt another girls tits before or had another girl feel hers, but because she was riding Chad bareback and she'd already cum two or three times in the last twenty minutes. Chad had run out of condoms from all the sex he'd been having with Elise (so he claimed), and neither of the girls had remembered to bring any with them to the reception, and Ellen was on the pill anyway so why not. And she was so hot from Chad and from the new thrill of making out with a girl that she didn't even notice, really, when Chad grunted a little louder and thrust his ass up off the mattress and shot a huge load inside her. She loved the feel of it.
"Hear what?" asked Ellen.
"Hear that girl screaming in the room next door."
"O my god really? Who was it?"
"I don't know, said Courtney, "I couldn't recognize the voice."
"What did it sound like?"
"It sounded hot. 'Fuck me raw, baby, fuck me Chad, come over and cum inside me with your big fat cock.'"
"O my god. That's so hot!"
"I know!" said Courtney. She leaned toward Chad and pushed her chest together for him, "Come fuck me, baby, come fuck me, Chad, come fuck me raw and give me a baby."
Chad was absolutely floored. He felt like he'd been kicked in the stomach, and he was hot and sweaty and kind of dizzy, and his dick was rock hard and pointing straight up at the ceiling. He felt like he might pass out from the electric shock of it.
"Looks like someone else in the group wants to fuck the team leader and it looks like the team leader likes it."
"I wonder who it is," asked Ellen, "whose room is that?"
Chad shrugged his shoulders.
He lay back on the bed, his nerves crackling, and tried to think carefully about what he'd just been told. He didn't know what it meant, but whatever it was he liked it, and he was determined to push his luck and try to find out more.
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hotel massacre (2)
meant to say before: sorry for the mess ;-)
I definitely want Kate's perspective to be believable so keep the constructive comments coming. Thanks again.
hotel massacre
Thanks for that point. Not nitpicky at all. Hope you still enjoyed the story.
I know this is nitpicky...
but as a woman I couldn't get past the fact that you said Kate was masturbating in the hotel while on her period. She had two pillows under her butt and her entire hand inside her. How on earth did she not ruin the pillows are leave any telltale signs? For most women, at least those of us with a heavy flow (which you mentioned Kate as having) it would have looked like a massacre occurred. You made no mention of her cleaning up or using any feminine products, just turning over and going back to sleep. You were so good at the other details that it surprised me you skipped that. Do I necessarily want to read those details in a hot story? Not really. But I found the idea of her lying in a pool of her own blood more distracting. Little things like this brought my score from five stars, down to four.more...
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You are a gifted writer and know how to build up a story. Very fluent narrative and interesting topic of primatology. You manage to strike intelligent and hot writing. Great job, please keep it going. Can't waitmore...
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