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They sat down on the bed in silence a few minutes. Cassie nearly wanted to say that she loved him, but knew that was inappropriate, and would give the young man too may ideas. She had enjoyed the encounter greatly, and in a way, did not want it to end. But she had agreed to stay there for two nights, and did not see herself resisting the temptation. Maybe after those nights, she could end it. Maybe.
Back at Molly's house, Cassie finally spoke, "Why Adam...Why do you make me want you so bad?"
"Cassie you are so sexy. What man wouldn't want you?"
He kissed her until she went on her knees. He faced Cassie and she knew what she wanted from her, and she wanted to give it to him. Soon Cassie had had his cock in her mouth, and felt it grow harder.
This time shed wanted his cum quick, and made her motions more rapidly than other times. In a few minutes he came int her mouth, and she swallowed it all.
"Did you always want to fuck me?" Cassie asked, not knowing why.
"Not really until recently," Adam replied, almost sounding a little ashamed.
"I have noticed you looking at my cleavage, even when your mom is around," Cassie said.
"That's because you are so beautiful, and I just couldn't control myself. And besides you usually wear low neck tops and flashing your cleavage."
"Go to the guest room," Cassie said.
Adam asked, "Why? Do you need anything?"
"I don't need anything, but you will get what you need," Cassie said, making him curious.
She leaned over him and pushed him back on the bed. Cassie kissed him and guided his cock inside her inviting warmth. As he moved deep within her, she pondered how long things could go on between them, and what did the future hold.
"You like that?" she asked while riding him steadily.
"Yes..." Adam moaned.
"Hmm... I love it too. Fuck me Adam," she said as she rolled over the bed taking him over her.
Adam adjusted himself over her and started to fuck her. She looked at him, thinking how much he was enjoying his mom's best friend. The thought turned her on even more. Adam grabbed her tits and squeezed them hard. Cassie's nipples were erect, and she wrapped one leg around his cute little butt.
She let him go on that way awhile, then rolled over him once more. She leaned over and asked him to lick both nipples. He did as she asked and she loved it.
"I'm going to cum," Adam announced.
Cassie slipped off of him and wrapped her lips around his cock head tightly, and he filled her mouth with his cum. She looked at him with her mouth filled with his cum, as swallowed. Again there was that awkward feeling on her mind. As long as his cock was in her mouth between her legs, she felt great. But most other times things seemed weird.
"Want to go out for lunch?" She asked.
"Sure," Adam replied.
Cassie took a shower and when she came back, Adam was not in the room. She picked out a pair of bra and panties along with a nice dress to go out for the lunch. She was doing her hair in front of the mirror when Adam came in wearing a t-shirt and jeans.
"Where were you?" She asked.
"I was taking shower and getting ready in my room," Adam said.
Cassie looked at him and said, "You could have taken a shower with me."
"I will remember that next time."
As they ate, she wondered if going out with your best friend's son in public was OK. Especially after having sex with him. And the thought about whether or not to end the relationship bothered her again.
"Was he really in love with her or just addicted? She only knew things were getting complicated. Both emotionally and sexually. She had given into her sexual feelings towards him, but she didn't want him to fall in love with her.
By the time they returned home Cassie had made her choice.
"Adam, once your Mom gets here I will go home, and this will be done between us. I have enjoyed the great sex, but that is all there is. I care for you but will never love you. You need someone your own age and I know you will find her someday. I am doing to bed, alone. So don't try to change my mind/ This is over between us. Good night."
She slept in the guest room with the door locked, knowing she deeply hurt Adam's feelings. But is was the best choice, and she would try to find someone better.
- COMMENTS
Rasmatover 9 years agoI can clearly see Ms. Wheeless, my 6th grade teacher asking me if I had suddenly forgotten everything she had taught me, then taking her note home to my gramma (a retired teacher) and grandpa (a retired newspaperman) and being rewarded with a couple hours daily of after school classwork for at least a couple of months, diagraming sentences.
But, as I said to begin with; I liked it. I could see past all the errors to the intended story, I think, and DID like it enough to look forward to a sequel or continuation of this story for several chapters.
I just signed up yesterday but have been reading daily for hours for for a couple of months (Ain't Retirement GREAT?)
I hope I didn't offend you. I see a good storyteller here with a little help from a proofreader or editor. Don't stop.
RASMAT
gentletouch1960about 10 years agoAuthorI never claimed to be a great writer, Learning by attempts and feedback.
Thanks for seeing this in me.
pontiacwhiteabout 10 years agoAre you kidding me? Where in this story or his profile did the author purport to be a great writer? Maybe I read with complete lack of comprehension and/or attention to detail, but I don't see this author as boastful. It's a nice story that might need a little work. Overall, I'd encourage this person to continue writing and to not let people like you fabricate stories about him and project (perhaps?) their own boastful tendencies.
SomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 10 years agoSomeone asked me if I thought James Franco, the actor, was a genius. I responded that I thought he was talented, but not as talented as "he" believed he was. There's a distinction.
I think you're a good author, but I don't think you're as good as "you" believe you are. I didn't pick up on the vibe of a person writing average material who aspires to become great, I instead got the vibe that I was reading average material that the author thought was already amazing.
I don't mean this to sound derisive, but I never, ever sugar-coat my criticism: This is a short story, on an erotica site, and it lasted not quite two full pages. The writing was decent, but not exceptional. The plot was decent, but not exceptional. There was evidence some kind of editing process took place, but it missed a lot of typos and other errors. (Halfway through, you began a paragraph with "Back at Molly's house, Adam moved his fingers..." which was confusing as all hell, since in the preceding paragraph, Adam and Cassie WERE in Molly's house. They didn't LEAVE Molly's house. So where did they come back FROM, to be be BACK at Molly's house?)
If you want to write a memorable story, you have to make it memorable. You can't write the equivalent of Chris Farley telling a story that consists in it's entirety of "Hey, remember that time that guy fell down? Heh, heh. That was funny." You wrote details that we (I am presuming) were supposed to take as "momentous and portentous" but they just weren't. They just "weren't", you know?
All in all, this was like reading a story composed by a fifth or sixth grade student as a homework assignment. One that they finished early, not something they waited until the last minute to start working on, but still... This might be a nice beginning, and it's good that you've got some confidence in yourself, but you've got to put in a lot more work before it's going to be as good as you seem to think it "already is".
Anonymousabout 10 years agoHowever, you could use an editor/proof reader, and a little more plot development.
This is NOT one of those 'you suck, die!' comments... those guys are just a$$holes who get off on bringing others down & I hate that - it is simply meant to help you become a better writer. You have a decent start here, but it just needs a little fine tuning.
Please understand that I know what I'm talking about, because I also submit stories here... and I had the same problem that you (& many others) have had. As an Author, you are actually your own worst editor - we all are.
Before posting a story, have someone else look it over - there are many readers here who volunteer to do exactly that - just search editors & talk to a few of them... shouldn't be too hard to find one who can help you.
Really - you are NOT far away, just need a little help 'getting there'... and there is no shame in that. The shame would be in not availing yourself of the resources that are available to help you.
Good Luck & keep writing!
