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Twelve months after setting out to save Stu, Danielle sat on her villa's balcony watching the sunset turn the smog laden sky pink, orange and purple. She was content and felt satisfied with her life.
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mattenwalmost 2 years ago....And just at that moment, feeling content with her life, the bullet hit her and shattered her skull.
And the moral of the story: everyone gets what they deserve!
Anonymousover 12 years agoA good novel. Well imagined. It leads to all kind of issues. Including erotic but too short sex episodes. Which in turn have frivolous back up. 2 years on this has little bearing but highlights the difficulties of weaving a meaningful global involved tale and meaningful casual sex . . . Even across 9 some double page chapters. Quality at this site I suspect, even if you have Alexan's talent, would be to focus on a sex event per chapter. Make sure you have the characters there to get involved even on a one off. Then the sex offer time. And glorious conclusion even if you are on your back and thinking of your country! Or need to concentrate on wallpaper patterns to avoid coming! Ps The spy stuff is too much Len D led.
Anonymousover 17 years agoSo you turned Dani into a lesbian. Not bad, and Stu is still a lover. I think you did a tremendous job in this story and would love to read about more escapades concering Dani. I think the diffferent sexual twists were great, the experimentation was fabulous.
I think she has the smarts and wiles to have many novels written about her.
What do u think?
